This update made me 5 star the game btw. I kept talking how everything was a bit boring and uneventful for the first few updates but I guess it was all just foreshadowing for this clusterfuck huh :P
It can be hard to take VNs too seriously. For example, blood tends to dry a bit quick on cloth. If they examine things more closely they will realize the only bit of blood on the MC is what dripped on his shoulder. If he got him from behind then trying to make that kind of gruesome cut on someone taller than you would be very hard especially if he had to close Raynar's muzzle shut to do it silently. I also feel like he seen this coming which is why he asked the MC to be there for his kid; Maybe they will find something like a note that exonerates him? Because it makes no sense to murder a king for no reason in silence and then tumble as youre running out of there like a total clutz and not a ninja. The dagger or whatever it was was also left at the scene. I think a sniff at it with a wolf species will be able to tell it wasnt touched by Richter. Maybe the design of it would be recognizable, maybe to Lyall if it belongs to that reptile assassin. Why else would it be left at the crime scene if the murderer wanted them to know who done it? [Unless they intended to frame MC from the beginning. In which case we dont have enough info on who the culprit is other than who may have planned it but not did it. If this VN made any sense at all it wont be someone short, weak, or unable to climb/fly like Lief, Liz, or Kadaj. And Adrius will just be another victim here, maybe puppeted. Kadaj as well. He must have seen this coming somehow. Whoever it is is trying to drive a wedge between Lyre and other kingdoms. Someone wants the throne methinks or just to really destabilize Lyre which is perfect for bandits to operate from if the kingdom becomes corrupted. It is all conjecture and we wont know what really happens in this story though. It is up to Atmac and his imagination].
he did it or have someone do it or knows the killer i think he did not want idk big if bit did not want the human to take the blame but did want he king killed
this chapter has many progresses... in several ways, like a
roller coaster but not knowing when to fall. It just happened so fast and keep coming. I hope things get clear next chapter. Anyways, that's a great Christmas gift and thank you for the story :D.
Well.... Think about again because I played with other visual novels and in the Immortal Justice (Appolyon Steel) on my Samsung galaxy s10+ couldn't load the Starry Night Sky imagine (in chapter 2) but on my older Huawei loaded it and I can continue it
And for me this visual novel has no problem but literally cannot load a picture on better phone in an other visual novel so yeah Samsung has a weird problem with visual novels (I tried to redownload it and restarted my phone too)
Little suggestion: I think you should add a little easter egg or memorial in the story for Mayer like idk add a graveyard of those who passed and the main character will read some of the grave stones while looking around idk its just a suggestion anyways look to the future and think positive and think of Mayer as motivation to continue on and may Mayer rest in piece.
May your friend rest in peace, my dog just passed away just yesterday and it was really hard for my family to lost our dog. May your friend soul fly to heaven.
Oye losiento por tu perdida hasta ami me entristese saber que se fue pero siempre lo recordaremos por su musica viejo siendo sincero me encanto su musica y me gustaria decircelo pero no se podra al parecer asi que mis mas profundos respetos momento pana 😔✋
Will this visual novel be in Spanish? I read that comment about using a program or something like that but unfortunately I don't have a pc and I would like to know if there will be a Spanish version or a way to translate it En es spanish for android please
Take your time creating new content. It's worth the wait. I really like this visual novel so far👌🏽😆💚💚💚💚💙. I'm so excited for what will happen in the future🧐🏃🏽♂️🏃🏽♂️🔥
I enjoyed playing this. Simply put, I would say that it does not contain the same pitfalls that a couple other VNs that I've read do. Character development and plot advancement are blended together nicely. The scene with the Lyall sticking his muzzle into the door in particular was pretty funny. There are plenty of other good moments in the game. Overall, it was enjoyable, and I would recommend this.
i know you probably get this question alot.. but what is the update schedule? ive tried looking everywhere for one. its alright if there isint one but i just wanted to ask :3
There is no update schedule. They usually take 1-3 months to make depending on the amount of content. I also like to announce the update 1-2 weeks before it releases for Patrons.
i am going to be honest. i love this. like alot. love lyall and his big snout through the peep hole. deserves a big ol boop. the way mc went about the dream/vision thing was kind of weird to me and over the top, but that may just be me :3 you are doing a wonderful job. id like to see maybe a secret route for the best little plague doctor ( we all know who that is lol ) keep up the amazing work!
hola, recomiendo usar "Screen Translate" y un lector de pantalla, si no puedes pagar puedes descargar crackeado, seleccionas dónde está el cuadro de texto y se traduce al hacer clic para cambiar la escena / actualización, mi idioma es pt - br y yo usamos esto para leer el nv, normalmente este tipo de proyecto no vale el costo / beneficio de la traducción por lo que recomiendo buscar una forma de traducción de imágenes si no el "Screen Translate" otro del mismo género.
maybe play it? just because he is a wolf doesint mean that it is a ripoff. the story is in a completely different setting with different story and their own characters. you cant copywrite a species. before hate commenting please play it first before you start to angry comment. this is honestly in my top 10.
English not first language, but if what I understand it is very well written and great drawing too, visuals are great! congratulations Atmac, great reading so far my friend!
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Why do i see someone that looks like Oswald from Eden's Reach in the ballroom
I know right! I think it was a reference because Eden's reach did that too with the people at the club
question is this game route based or is the story totally linear?
It is Linear and It is the cute wolf boy you see everywhere
I cried, I'm still crying...
That was a rollercoaster and I want more of it damn it
YOU CANT LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT
This update made me 5 star the game btw. I kept talking how everything was a bit boring and uneventful for the first few updates but I guess it was all just foreshadowing for this clusterfuck huh :P
oh my dog that was amazing, i absolutely love how the plot is unveiling and cant wait for the next update to come out. Keep up the good work atmac ❤.
This went from yes yes yes to no no no real fast I CAN'T TAKE IT
I did it lol.
It can be hard to take VNs too seriously. For example, blood tends to dry a bit quick on cloth. If they examine things more closely they will realize the only bit of blood on the MC is what dripped on his shoulder. If he got him from behind then trying to make that kind of gruesome cut on someone taller than you would be very hard especially if he had to close Raynar's muzzle shut to do it silently. I also feel like he seen this coming which is why he asked the MC to be there for his kid; Maybe they will find something like a note that exonerates him? Because it makes no sense to murder a king for no reason in silence and then tumble as youre running out of there like a total clutz and not a ninja. The dagger or whatever it was was also left at the scene. I think a sniff at it with a wolf species will be able to tell it wasnt touched by Richter. Maybe the design of it would be recognizable, maybe to Lyall if it belongs to that reptile assassin. Why else would it be left at the crime scene if the murderer wanted them to know who done it? [Unless they intended to frame MC from the beginning. In which case we dont have enough info on who the culprit is other than who may have planned it but not did it. If this VN made any sense at all it wont be someone short, weak, or unable to climb/fly like Lief, Liz, or Kadaj. And Adrius will just be another victim here, maybe puppeted. Kadaj as well. He must have seen this coming somehow. Whoever it is is trying to drive a wedge between Lyre and other kingdoms. Someone wants the throne methinks or just to really destabilize Lyre which is perfect for bandits to operate from if the kingdom becomes corrupted. It is all conjecture and we wont know what really happens in this story though. It is up to Atmac and his imagination].
I don't really know. I feel it can be nearly anyone
The bandits that attacked his wife, the suscicious kitty, dead fish eye woman, his son, someone we wouldn't assume like lief.
cat i am calling him out he was blunt af at the dance
he did it or have someone do it or knows the killer i think he did not want idk big if bit did not want the human to take the blame but did want he king killed
Oddly I can't install the apk file in the android version, it says File not downloaded
I had to unninstall the game first irc
I think the android version has a problem, I cant download it
It was good and an interesting chapter
Besides of that I found a missing e
what the fuckity-fucking-fuck just fucking happened
too much happened. TOO FUCKING MUCH
this chapter has many progresses... in several ways, like a
roller coaster but not knowing when to fall. It just happened so fast and keep coming. I hope things get clear next chapter. Anyways, that's a great Christmas gift and thank you for the story :D.
I can't press start or any thing on the menu im stuck. Im using android.
Same here, as soon as I do the game crashes :/
Potential spoilers:
I love the little Oswald cameo in the ballroom. 😃😃😃
Yeah I saw that too hehe.
New here.. and I must say Lyall has good figure ❤️.. Good story so far.. just one question how do you pronounce Lyall?
Like La-yal? Or Le-yal?
Lie-all
Thanks! And by the way,
Hope your doing well 🙂
Happy Holidays everyone!! 😃😃😃😃😃
Hello Atmac I was just wondering if you're doing well. 🙂🙂🙂
Game crashes on Android for no apparent reason. Can't boot for longer than 5 seconds. Otherwise seemed like an interesting game lol
Maybe try to reinstall?
Tried that, didn't work unfortunately.
Maybe It's the device? It works just fine on my tablet.
I'm on a Samsung, so I don't see why this would happen.
I'm sorry to say that I don't think I can help. 😥😥😥
Well.... Think about again because I played with other visual novels and in the Immortal Justice (Appolyon Steel) on my Samsung galaxy s10+ couldn't load the Starry Night Sky imagine (in chapter 2) but on my older Huawei loaded it and I can continue it
And for me this visual novel has no problem but literally cannot load a picture on better phone in an other visual novel so yeah Samsung has a weird problem with visual novels (I tried to redownload it and restarted my phone too)
If it helps, I'm going to try and fix problems like this in the next build.
Hey...you doing okay? I just came across this game and saw the post of what happened to your close friend. I'm very sorry for your loss :(
Little suggestion: I think you should add a little easter egg or memorial in the story for Mayer like idk add a graveyard of those who passed and the main character will read some of the grave stones while looking around idk its just a suggestion anyways look to the future and think positive and think of Mayer as motivation to continue on and may Mayer rest in piece.
May your friend rest in peace, my dog just passed away just yesterday and it was really hard for my family to lost our dog. May your friend soul fly to heaven.
Oye losiento por tu perdida hasta ami me entristese saber que se fue pero siempre lo recordaremos por su musica viejo siendo sincero me encanto su musica y me gustaria decircelo pero no se podra al parecer asi que mis mas profundos respetos momento pana 😔✋
Can we able to date John the red wolf?
Two cute guys in the game whoop whoop
Will this visual novel be in Spanish? I read that comment about using a program or something like that but unfortunately I don't have a pc and I would like to know if there will be a Spanish version or a way to translate it En es spanish for android please
Entonces, el programa que mencioné es precisamente para Android.
Tomate tu tiempo bro despues de todo un descanso no hace mal a nadie como digo cada cosa a su tiempo :)
Take your time creating new content. It's worth the wait. I really like this visual novel so far👌🏽😆💚💚💚💚💙. I'm so excited for what will happen in the future🧐🏃🏽♂️🏃🏽♂️🔥
Happy NaNoWriMo Atmac!!! 😃😃😃
I enjoyed playing this. Simply put, I would say that it does not contain the same pitfalls that a couple other VNs that I've read do. Character development and plot advancement are blended together nicely. The scene with the Lyall sticking his muzzle into the door in particular was pretty funny. There are plenty of other good moments in the game. Overall, it was enjoyable, and I would recommend this.
I TRULY Enjoyed this.
i know you probably get this question alot.. but what is the update schedule? ive tried looking everywhere for one. its alright if there isint one but i just wanted to ask :3
There is no update schedule. They usually take 1-3 months to make depending on the amount of content. I also like to announce the update 1-2 weeks before it releases for Patrons.
alright! thank you for letting me know! love your work! if this game comes at a price when its fully out i would so get it! ^-^
Me 2 😍
i am going to be honest. i love this. like alot. love lyall and his big snout through the peep hole. deserves a big ol boop. the way mc went about the dream/vision thing was kind of weird to me and over the top, but that may just be me :3 you are doing a wonderful job. id like to see maybe a secret route for the best little plague doctor ( we all know who that is lol ) keep up the amazing work!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
downloading the file takes too long and then it fails midway
I think It's a Ren'Py thing, because it does that to me with different VN's.
maybe... the other games download faster even at larger files
Me gustaria que estubiera al español por el momento no puedo encontrar ninguno al español 😔
ok gracias por la info ahora me lo descargo al programa aver que tal
Talk about a cliché Adastra ripoff
Human + wolf = adAsTra ripoff
Stfu and actually play the game
Hi, Sole dev here.
Quick question...have you played it?
Damn, I must have missed all the sci-fi interplanetary stuff. Seriously, go troll somewhere else.
maybe play it? just because he is a wolf doesint mean that it is a ripoff. the story is in a completely different setting with different story and their own characters. you cant copywrite a species. before hate commenting please play it first before you start to angry comment. this is honestly in my top 10.
But... you didn't even like that game
English not first language, but if what I understand it is very well written and great drawing too, visuals are great! congratulations Atmac, great reading so far my friend!Will it have nsfw in the future?
There should already be some NSFW depending on how far in you are.