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chapter 12 holy shit WHAT

OMG

i feel so many things, but mostly, good job on rendering an accurate portrayal of a genuine psychopath as seen in the character of adrian. those tender scenes with lyall thruout the vn are also very precious, 10/10 always need more

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Soo...first ever playthrough just finished up to current chapter as time of writing (12)

-no spoilers ahead-

From the very beginning it had me captivated from the beautiful artwork to the incredibly written story telling. It had really good set-up to ease you into the game and the narrative. Each character, main and side, are so well flushed out, full of life and personality. The plot hooks are very well done to keep you thinking and keep you captivated. 

Overall, 100% worth playing if you haven't already (which I assume most have). I'm very excited to see where the story goes, and will for sure be coming back with each update. Well done so far to everyone working on this game, amazing truly!

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I've gotta say, I was a little unsure how I felt about this VN initially when I first started and played the first few chapters... but the writing has improved SO much over the latest few chapters and I've been left HOOKED. The pacing and story telling was absolutely perfect in chapters 9-12. Can't wait for the next chapter!! :D

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just finished chapter 12.. screaming. crying. throwing up. omg that was so worth the wait. now let me curl up in a corner of my room and sob about it.

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Thank you for this. I didn't want to have to screenshot it myself.

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sry my bad

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It's alright. I need to get around to making the warnings a bit more specific some time soon. I'm just struggling to figure out how to word it.

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I did tag it with "intense violence", but I suppose being a little more specific couldn't hurt. I plan to update the warning soon.

Still, it was a fair warning. I dont really think I deserve the attitude. 😕

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Chapter 12 Spoilers! 





















Did anyone else see the MC running through the flowers as a D4C reference??

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What is D4C?

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Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap, from JoJo

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I haven't read JOJO, only watched it. I know what stand you're talking about though.

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Tygren finished reading part 7 and decided to take inspiration for his move at the end haha

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I was hoping Adrius would get a redemption arc, but after reading Chapter 12, maybe that's a little too generous for him.

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Whenever I go to update the VN on my phone, its keeps throwing me this error

The only thing that seems to work is deleting the app from my phone and then installing the update, but that deletes my save data in the process!

I'm using a Galaxy Note 10+ running Android 12 (don't know the specific version)


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Took me 3 days to read up until chapter 12 and boy oh boy was it a rollercoaster. The writing is AMAZING. Can't wait for Chapter 13.

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Can't wait for the next chapter pls make it soon

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I got so exhausted just reading the new chapter. My face got so hot I feel like I'm gonna have a fever. The only thing left I can say is: You need a fucking content warning on this VN

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You're right. I should update the warning at the beginning. Apologies.


I figured "adult content" would also include violence, but I now realize I should be more specific.

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i finished adastra a few days ago. this is what i need to take my mind of it. hope i don't fall into a "post lyre depression"

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Reading this after adastra? Praying for your mental health

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thats a great sign

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AMICUS AVOCADO

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yes. amicus avicado or as i call him 

avcadoius

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it really well worth the wait and torture, I have to admit the last chapter I have read for several time just to feel the power of run for life, knid remind me Max from Strange things though. by the way I find recommend project like one last night it's pretty cool too,  you guys it's really amazing. 

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P.S. is the evil prince get possessed by some evil gods cause only gods words go with a strange sounds? kinda like sound effect in Undertale 

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(Literal) torture but worth that payoff at the end! Kudos especially to that final musical composition, proper got me saying "hell yeah, beat feet my dude!". My one qualm, knowing absolutely when it faded to black, saying "don't you do it, don't you da- *to be continued* DAMMIT". I'll be back for more!

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Jesus Christ! This latest update had me sweating like I've just ran a marathon. And I'm sitting in my underwear. Now that's a sign of brilliant story writing.

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Even though Chapter 12 was quite a wait from Chapter 11, what an woooonderful visual novel! The world building, character building, story telling- the music especially~... everything is so on point and it leads to a suspenseful yet fulfilling story that also has it's own little charm of uniqueness. I can't wait to see where Atmac and the team take this novel considering that they've written a compelling story thus far. What an amazing novel.

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I knew it! As soon as Liz said someone had already sent out the Headsman, I knew it was Lyall. I've been waiting and wondering "how is Lyall going to show up" and you definitely made it worth waiting for. I have to admit I nearly cried seeing the art at the end too!

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Oh my god the rush i got when i realized it was Lyall !!!!!!

Best update ever !

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this is epic!

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That was amazing!

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That was SO GOOD!! Ah! I have no other words!! 😃😃😃

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Just finished reading chapter 12 and it was absolutely stellar, great job!

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Yoo just finished reading this earlier this week! Nice timing! ^o^

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Happy birthday, atmac 🥰

I sincerely wish you the best, you are very talented one 😸

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this vN  is so so so so soooooooo good I HAVE to know what happens next omg 

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Atmac knows how to keep us in suspense. I hate and love it at the same time. I wonder what happened to Lyall and what's the plan...wonder of Elizabeth is in on whatever Lyall has planned.

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OMG I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, I SPENT THE PAST FEW DAYS IN PAIN FROM MY HEART BING IN KNOTS BECAUSE OF THIS GAME AND ITS STORY, PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW. IF MY HEART WILL EVER BE NORMAL AGAIN. PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU....PLEASE KEEP THIS GOING. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!

We have maybe about a month or more to wait. Just basing that timing on the previous update cycles, since Atmac releases a patreon update 1st every 3-4months and public maybe a week later.

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This is by far the best VN I’ve played, like ever, and I’ve played adastra and khemia, lyre is amazing and has great storyline and out of this world art, like so good and I can’t even explain it in words, the characters make you enveloped in the story and personally I fell in love with Lyall 10/10 would recommend! I love this sosososososoosososo much!

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Thank you so much, im glad you're enjoying it!

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Been binge playing a lot of VNs lately, but this is the one that finally made me create an itch account just to say how god damn great it's been, keep it up, will be eagerly waiting for more!

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Thank you so much!

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THIS IS AWFUL THE STORY IS OK BUT I'M STILL CRYING I NEED TO KNOW WHY AND IF IT GETS BETTER CAUSE THIS IS GONNA DRIVE ME INSANE.

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Why are you yelling?calm down buddy so I don't get a heart attack

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sorry caps lock got stuck

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When will be next chapter 12

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the most detailed vn iv ever seen

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I wonder when's the next chapter coming out. It is so good. The storyline is fantastic.

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By far one of my favorite VN's also the first i ever read/played (what would you use for a VN)

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Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it!

There are plenty of engines you could use. One of the most common ones and the one Lyre uses is Ren'Py. It's the most up to date if I remember correctly. Also, I'm pretty sure I've heard of some people using Unreal Engine.

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Just got done reading this an OH MY EVER LOVING GOD, that scene in chapter 11 bro, I have no words, it was just, wow! I swear, if [REDACTED] isn't gonna pay for what they did, I WILL throw things, I swear on my mother


Great Vn BTW~

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holy hell that plot twist made me shocked!! but amazing story though! cant wait for more

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does it lag out of nowhere for anyone??? every time i read a couple of lines it just starts lagging so much for no reason, i dont think its my pc is its pretty new so im not sure if it is the game or it really is my pc :P also this started happening when i got the new chapter 11 update.

That honestly shouldn't be happening and I have no explanation for it. If you want to join the discord and explain more about your problems running it in the bugs chat, I'd be happy to try and help, but I honestly can't think of any reason why this would happen.

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The lag is kinda random. I guess it depends on how the pc turns on. I have sometimes those problems that one time when I read a vn it lags, but other time the same vn suddenly doesn't have problem. So you either you can just accept it and ignore it, or just try to restart your pc

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OMGGG I NEED THE NEXT PARRTT

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I knew it! Ugh! This is going to make me crazy now. Good writing but, god, now I just want the next part to come even sooner!

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