after reading everything 3 to 4 months ago i completely forgot to leave a comment but uh when i saw the Lyre VN i said to myself "ugh this visual novel is gonna be terrible" i started reading through it and i deeply regret saying it was i mean the music,the images and how the story started and ended was completely amazing and i can't stop to listen to most of its song if i had to choose i would say lyre would be a very good VN to read first before any other
God damn am I excited for Dryz. I already like dark stuff, but aside from that, all of the characters are really good. I like Elizabeth, Lyall, the bird doctor guy, and a lot more characters. Also, I can't wait to beat Adrius' ass in the sequel. Awesome VN, 10/10.
Atmac, you are not allowed to say you are bad at writing these stories. I am in love with your characters and am fully invested in their future. The years of love you put into this piece have produced a true work of art.
Augustovich's music perfectly complemented everything.
I will be backing you on Patreon for the rest of this series. Kind regards,
pretty epic but also the "logo" is lyall but mid-way through the story, adrius is the main focus but he is on the "logo" for the 2nd book, i just thought that was funny but also tis pretty fun
I finished this masterpiece today and i have no words it's just incredibly amazing, i'm so excited for what to comes next! Again i have no words to explain how beautiful and well writen this story is, i loved all the characters and hopefully my beloveds have an happy ending! (Except Adrius) I'll be looking forward and wish you all the luck and success for the next stories, i know they will be as wonderful and amazing as this one!! <33
Read the whole thing over the course of a couple of days. Art was great, music was fantastic, story was wonderful, noun followed by praising adjective. Would heavily recommend giving a read.
istg if Liz gets presented with the opportunity to pimp slap Adrius before she inevitably fucks off away from his bitchass to join Lyall and Richter on their journey, but doesn't take it, I will be SO mad.
I literally read this to the point I skipped sleep cause I couldn't put it down. So often I caught myself holding my breathe waiting for what would come next at certain points. This was so beautifully written I don't have words to express my gratitude towards you. It hit so hard in the best way possible making me get incredibly attached to the main characters. Once I reached the end of this I felt like there was a void in my soul sitting here unable to read anything else because all I can think about right now is how I want more of this world you have created and Lyall! I will for sure be supporting on Patreon to help further your endeavors in all your future VN's <3 please keep going, you are amazing
i've spent a whole day going through this vn, and i gotta say it's amazing. the arts are good ( although personally i think the 3rd picture in this webpage looks a bit weird about the left arm ) . the musics are not only wonderful but working perfectly alongwith the stories, especially two named Genuine Thoughts and Eyes That See the Horizon . the stories however are my favorite part of the vn . how the two main character meet, get along with , fall in love with each other, and how they put everything they can for each other reminds me what true love stands for - pure adoration, devotion and support for each other. that's what deeply touches my heart, as i've been numbly living a single life for years and almost forget what love is. it's a shame that i didn't come across this vn earlier.
i'm sorry for my strange way of expression, since i'm not a native english speaker. but i suddenly gained an uncontrollable impulse to share my thoughts right after reading this vn . Overall , i really love this vn . can't wait for the next project !
Omg, just finished reading this wonderful vn and I LOVED it!! It is currently my second favorite vn ive ever read, cant wait for the second vn Dryz to come out! I'll be waiting!
Hello, I hope you don't mind that I archived the game in the link below, would it be possible for you to make the older versions listed available for completeness? loved the game by the way :3
I am not well-acquainted with visual novels (I've only played three others, one of them being a FVN), but Lyre was a very nice experience. The characters are well-written, the visuals are pretty, but above all is the music; it really sells the atmosphere, and I've found myself coming back to it several times since finishing.
My biggest gripe is that Lyre is not a self-contained story. While it doesn't end on a cliffhanger, it doesn't conclude at a solid stopping point and there are several story threads that remain largely unanswered. I don't say this as a criticism, just as an FYI to people scrolling the comments (and there is a sequel planned!). Unlike other media with this attribute (such as 2021's Dune), I'd still recommend Lyre if it interests you. Even if it's not the whole story, it does still tell a whole arc.
Regardless, I thoroughly enjoyed Lyre. It was a nice romance in a fantastical setting, which was exactly what I was looking for. I'll certainly be keeping an eye out for Dryz and other future works!
I just made an account to say that i enjoyed this story a lot and i cannot wait for it to continue, i love adrius as a charecter, he is so broken its amaizing. (And lief is my fave, he's so cute, give my man more screen time in the sequal please)
Just finished reading it and I enjoyed it more than I thought it would! glad I waited so long to start so I can binge all of it haha. My only small critique is that Adrius is definitely in need of a sprite update since he always looks like a child to me. That being said - can't wait for Dryz!
I absolutely loved this VN! I binged read for the past four days and I'm absolutely in love with this series. As a writer myself, I applaud the author for making great complex characters and having good pacing throughout the story. The universe is interesting and I'm eager to learn more about Dryz and see Richter and Lyall's relationship grow in the next book! I would have to give this story a 9/10. Not to mention that the art looks very beautiful! One of the pictures made me flabbergasted at the amount of colors and detail in it. I added the soundtrack to my YouTube playlist as throughout the VN; the music enhances the scenes. For example, when Lyall's theme plays I get a sense of feeling safe in his presence and he is that person who you truly feel happy with.
I often be at a moment saying, "Damn, this music sounds really good!"
Keep up the great work and I subscribed to the patreon as well!
P.S. I love it when VN writers KNOW how to write complex characters because apparently some writers in the gaming industry can't write a complex character correctly leading to them being messed up!
I love it, Desde principio a fin como todo se complcia pasa el tiempo pero no importa que se complique siempre hay una luz y la luz de lyall es "nosotros" y la de "nosotros" es el...hay me encanto que mas que decir 10/10 no puedo esperar la segunda temporada.
i dont know what to say besides that even the word amazing cant describes how good the story was.
i was left speechless within the last three chapters.
i thought i was gonna get sadness or happiness feelings in the ending like the others novel i read, but no. Instead it was an excitement. well, probably because i knew there will be more story to tell. Cant wait for the part 2.
OMG, I cried while playing it, the music and the characters' emotions I felt were so real, after all I hope the main character and Lyall can be happy together at the end of their journey, I feel quite scared that they can't be together if the main character will disappear after completing the mission of an avatar.
@atmac, you ok? I've been checking my itch.io almost bi-daily for half a year now, and your last post was over 90 days ago. Sorry if I'm being strange, I'm just worried. After all, this is the first, and best, VN I've ever read. I'm starting to worry something happened (like you got cancer or smth.) Good job on the VN and hope to see more soon.
Everything's fine on my end! I post regular updates on my Twitter and I'm trying to post more on Patreon as I get things done. I'm just very busy right now with both life and working on Lyre's definitive edition, along with getting everything together for Dryz.
Lyre is the only visual novel that I fell in love with more on my second read through. When I first had read through Lyre I had just finished Adastra and was expecting similar writing to it. I was disappointed at first until I realized that Lyre once you pass the first 2 or so chapters is a surprisingly complex and well written story with enjoyable and arguably better written characters than Adastra. Also lastly on a unrelated note. Lyall is best boy :
I am new to the world of furry visual novels and glad to say that Lyre is one of the first FVNs I've already read.
NEXT PART CAN CONTAIN DIRECT/INDIRECT SPOILERS, BEWARE!
First and main reason why I'm so fond of this novel is it's plot. Story of a stigmated love amidst hostile environment of courtier games, treachery, deception and hypocracy. It's certainly a trial of will both for Knight and his Lord. And it's fascinating to see that they've chosen happiness, striving to it no matter what. Situation is gloomy for them, but they're certainly not left alone. Good Leif, righteous Eliza, Kadaj (Ambassador Floppa) who is loyal to Tygren and fair blacksmith Edan are amongst their allies as well as something beneath mortal's understanding.
Speaking of characters, they all of them are well-written. I think we all agree how interesting and relatable Richter and Lyall are, how caring and merciful Leif is, etc.
But let's talk about young heir Adrius, who is without any doubt a complete dastard. Yet his character is sort of understandable. Yes, his methods are awfully brutal, he doesn't mind getting rid even of closest people, if they are in the way of achieving goals.
Nonetheless, giving a better look on his personality, we can understand Adrius' motivation and relate to it.
Let's look from his perpective. In the past he was a cute little fawn, playing in royal garden. Everyone loved him and he loved everyone, and there was a person who shared the strongest bond with Adrius. His own mother, which was everything for him. And he lost her to some rascals, a member of royal family, the queen and his world were brutally slayed because politicians can't and seemingly don't even want to reach an agreement.
Everyone are so slow, indifferent and not caring. Even Lyall, so tall, a growing warrior, was so slow, proved to be uncapable of fulfilling his one and only duty, to protect the queen. This wolf doesn't even deserves a name. It's a dog!
That is why Adrius has to be swift, desicive and determined. Even it mean wiping out everyone on his way. He doesn't want to be anything alike this slackers all around him.
I'm not sure if he truly wants peace for the people of Lyre, but a complete change of personality is most certainly connected with his gestalt. And for that Adrius needs MORE POWER (He is the tempest that is approaching, provoking)!
Great character designs, as well as pleasant artstyle, picturesque views and great music creates a truly bewitching experience overall.
Also I find it funny enough that the game and most characters has some sort of parallel parallel with Adastra's cast :D :
Adastra-Lyre (both names given after places where plot is going on)
Parents-Tygren (divine forces playing around main scene)
Amicus—Lyall (Big caring black wolfs, both of noble families. One is himbo, other one is Geralt of Rivia)
Whole fragment where MC being imprisoned by a mad ruler and saved with his Wolf and providence itself.
Virginia—Eliza (Strong women characters, fair and capable of ruling country)
Cassius—Adrius (Vile lads with understandable motivation, both heirs)
etc.
By the way, Lyre is clearly offering us a different story. I am not 100% sure, but the inspiration by Adastra can be seen here, or vice versa.
Nevertheless, I am fond of this epic story and only looking forward for it's continuation in the next books. 8,5 of 10. Which is "Touching piece of art". Absolutely in love with it!
What an incredibly well crafted experience. The art, the worldbuilding, the music, the characters, the subtle details and the unsolved mysteries. I've enjoyed every part of this visual novel and I cannot wait for more. Thank you to the creators of this amazing journey.
hi I played Lyre and honestly I loved the characters, the story, the setting and the images I loved everything thank you very much for introducing me to a story as great and fantastic as it sounds and very honestly I can't wait for the release of Dryz I have palpitations in my stomach and it's not the palpitations of a "wolf" hunger you understand, in short I can't wait for the rest good luck , Good luck and keep it up.
Hello, I don't speak much English, so the text written in my native language will be below. The exciting impulsive plot, soul-touching music, the sophistication of the scenes and the extreme smallness of NSFW content make this novel an amazing read. I recommend it to everyone 💗
Захватывающий импульсивный сюжет, затрагивающая душу музыка, изысканность сцен и крайняя малость NSFW контента делают данную новеллу потрясающей для прочтения. Всем её рекомендую 💗
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How dare you make me cry like this. Absolutely beautiful VN down to every facet - art, music, story, all phenomenal. Thank you so much for this.
after reading everything 3 to 4 months ago i completely forgot to leave a comment but uh when i saw the Lyre VN i said to myself "ugh this visual novel is gonna be terrible" i started reading through it and i deeply regret saying it was i mean the music,the images and how the story started and ended was completely amazing and i can't stop to listen to most of its song if i had to choose i would say lyre would be a very good VN to read first before any other
God damn am I excited for Dryz. I already like dark stuff, but aside from that, all of the characters are really good. I like Elizabeth, Lyall, the bird doctor guy, and a lot more characters. Also, I can't wait to beat Adrius' ass in the sequel. Awesome VN, 10/10.
Thank you so much!
i just finished reading it and oh boy it was gorgeous the music,the art,the bg and pretty much the rest of it
is it weird that i love them being together? they're just so adorable
really looking forward on the next sequel!
Thank you!
Lord Richter of Eryn: agreeable INTJ
Lyall Reed: ESFJ with developed Ne
King Adrius Ossian of Lyre: ISTP with developed Se and Fe
King Raynar Ossian of Lyre: disagreeable ESFJ with developed Si
Elizabeth Rene of Rosewind: INTJ with developed Te
Lord Kadaj of Drys: ENFJ with developed Ni
Leif: agreeable ISTJ
I dont know what this mean but i agree with this man
Beautiful doesn't even begin to describe this novel, it is beyond words i'm afraid, truly a work of art.
Atmac, you are not allowed to say you are bad at writing these stories. I am in love with your characters and am fully invested in their future. The years of love you put into this piece have produced a true work of art.
Augustovich's music perfectly complemented everything.
I will be backing you on Patreon for the rest of this series. Kind regards,
pretty epic but also the "logo" is lyall but mid-way through the story, adrius is the main focus but he is on the "logo" for the 2nd book, i just thought that was funny but also tis pretty fun
I finished this masterpiece today and i have no words it's just incredibly amazing, i'm so excited for what to comes next! Again i have no words to explain how beautiful and well writen this story is, i loved all the characters and hopefully my beloveds have an happy ending! (Except Adrius) I'll be looking forward and wish you all the luck and success for the next stories, i know they will be as wonderful and amazing as this one!! <33
Thank you for reading!
Read the whole thing over the course of a couple of days. Art was great, music was fantastic, story was wonderful, noun followed by praising adjective. Would heavily recommend giving a read.
Thank you!
One of the greats. I cant believe this is free.
can't wait to see Lyall with updated neck floof
istg if Liz gets presented with the opportunity to pimp slap Adrius before she inevitably fucks off away from his bitchass to join Lyall and Richter on their journey, but doesn't take it, I will be SO mad.
I literally read this to the point I skipped sleep cause I couldn't put it down. So often I caught myself holding my breathe waiting for what would come next at certain points. This was so beautifully written I don't have words to express my gratitude towards you. It hit so hard in the best way possible making me get incredibly attached to the main characters. Once I reached the end of this I felt like there was a void in my soul sitting here unable to read anything else because all I can think about right now is how I want more of this world you have created and Lyall! I will for sure be supporting on Patreon to help further your endeavors in all your future VN's <3 please keep going, you are amazing
Thank you so much!
Is that oswald from eden's reach in the ballroom?
Idk 😏
Spoilers!
Just speculation, but Adrius is totally gonna lose the other antler by the end of Dryz
for me, losing the antlers is some kind of madness alegory!
i've spent a whole day going through this vn, and i gotta say it's amazing. the arts are good ( although personally i think the 3rd picture in this webpage looks a bit weird about the left arm ) . the musics are not only wonderful but working perfectly alongwith the stories, especially two named Genuine Thoughts and Eyes That See the Horizon . the stories however are my favorite part of the vn . how the two main character meet, get along with , fall in love with each other, and how they put everything they can for each other reminds me what true love stands for - pure adoration, devotion and support for each other. that's what deeply touches my heart, as i've been numbly living a single life for years and almost forget what love is. it's a shame that i didn't come across this vn earlier.
i'm sorry for my strange way of expression, since i'm not a native english speaker. but i suddenly gained an uncontrollable impulse to share my thoughts right after reading this vn . Overall , i really love this vn . can't wait for the next project !
I'm glad it resonated with you so well!
Omg, just finished reading this wonderful vn and I LOVED it!! It is currently my second favorite vn ive ever read, cant wait for the second vn Dryz to come out! I'll be waiting!
Thank you!
Is this game fully done?
Yes
This game is nswf or sfw???
NSFW, but there is a toggle to censor things. Still, I wouldn't classify it as SFW.
Hello, I hope you don't mind that I archived the game in the link below, would it be possible for you to make the older versions listed available for completeness? loved the game by the way :3
https://archive.org/details/lyre-game
-Vila
I don't have them, sorry.
I am not well-acquainted with visual novels (I've only played three others, one of them being a FVN), but Lyre was a very nice experience. The characters are well-written, the visuals are pretty, but above all is the music; it really sells the atmosphere, and I've found myself coming back to it several times since finishing.
My biggest gripe is that Lyre is not a self-contained story. While it doesn't end on a cliffhanger, it doesn't conclude at a solid stopping point and there are several story threads that remain largely unanswered. I don't say this as a criticism, just as an FYI to people scrolling the comments (and there is a sequel planned!). Unlike other media with this attribute (such as 2021's Dune), I'd still recommend Lyre if it interests you. Even if it's not the whole story, it does still tell a whole arc.
Regardless, I thoroughly enjoyed Lyre. It was a nice romance in a fantastical setting, which was exactly what I was looking for. I'll certainly be keeping an eye out for Dryz and other future works!
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I just made an account to say that i enjoyed this story a lot and i cannot wait for it to continue, i love adrius as a charecter, he is so broken its amaizing. (And lief is my fave, he's so cute, give my man more screen time in the sequal please)
I will try
I'm so impressed that you reply to these comment, thank you!
Its my pleasure! Im glad you like Leif and Adrius. They're very dear to me.
Just finished reading it and I enjoyed it more than I thought it would! glad I waited so long to start so I can binge all of it haha. My only small critique is that Adrius is definitely in need of a sprite update since he always looks like a child to me. That being said - can't wait for Dryz!
It's his big head for his big brain.
He'll be getting an update :)
I absolutely loved this VN! I binged read for the past four days and I'm absolutely in love with this series. As a writer myself, I applaud the author for making great complex characters and having good pacing throughout the story. The universe is interesting and I'm eager to learn more about Dryz and see Richter and Lyall's relationship grow in the next book! I would have to give this story a 9/10. Not to mention that the art looks very beautiful! One of the pictures made me flabbergasted at the amount of colors and detail in it. I added the soundtrack to my YouTube playlist as throughout the VN; the music enhances the scenes. For example, when Lyall's theme plays I get a sense of feeling safe in his presence and he is that person who you truly feel happy with.
I often be at a moment saying, "Damn, this music sounds really good!"
Keep up the great work and I subscribed to the patreon as well!
P.S. I love it when VN writers KNOW how to write complex characters because apparently some writers in the gaming industry can't write a complex character correctly leading to them being messed up!
Thank you so much, I'm glad you loved it!
I love it, Desde principio a fin como todo se complcia pasa el tiempo pero no importa que se complique siempre hay una luz y la luz de lyall es "nosotros" y la de "nosotros" es el...hay me encanto que mas que decir 10/10 no puedo esperar la segunda temporada.
...
i dont know what to say besides that even the word amazing cant describes how good the story was.
i was left speechless within the last three chapters.
i thought i was gonna get sadness or happiness feelings in the ending like the others novel i read, but no. Instead it was an excitement. well, probably because i knew there will be more story to tell. Cant wait for the part 2.
5/5 This is art
Thank you!
OMG, I cried while playing it, the music and the characters' emotions I felt were so real, after all I hope the main character and Lyall can be happy together at the end of their journey, I feel quite scared that they can't be together if the main character will disappear after completing the mission of an avatar.
Is there more to come or is this story concluded?
*This* book is concluded, but there will be two more sequels released.
@atmac, you ok? I've been checking my itch.io almost bi-daily for half a year now, and your last post was over 90 days ago. Sorry if I'm being strange, I'm just worried. After all, this is the first, and best, VN I've ever read. I'm starting to worry something happened (like you got cancer or smth.) Good job on the VN and hope to see more soon.
Everything's fine on my end! I post regular updates on my Twitter and I'm trying to post more on Patreon as I get things done. I'm just very busy right now with both life and working on Lyre's definitive edition, along with getting everything together for Dryz.
Sorry if I caused a hassle. I don't have Twitter so I didn't realise. Sometimes I forget other people have lives too. Sorry!
Definitivamente uma das minhas VNs favoritas <3
Lyre is the only visual novel that I fell in love with more on my second read through. When I first had read through Lyre I had just finished Adastra and was expecting similar writing to it. I was disappointed at first until I realized that Lyre once you pass the first 2 or so chapters is a surprisingly complex and well written story with enjoyable and arguably better written characters than Adastra. Also lastly on a unrelated note. Lyall is best boy :
I am new to the world of furry visual novels and glad to say that Lyre is one of the first FVNs I've already read.
NEXT PART CAN CONTAIN DIRECT/INDIRECT SPOILERS, BEWARE!
First and main reason why I'm so fond of this novel is it's plot. Story of a stigmated love amidst hostile environment of courtier games, treachery, deception and hypocracy. It's certainly a trial of will both for Knight and his Lord. And it's fascinating to see that they've chosen happiness, striving to it no matter what. Situation is gloomy for them, but they're certainly not left alone. Good Leif, righteous Eliza, Kadaj (Ambassador Floppa) who is loyal to Tygren and fair blacksmith Edan are amongst their allies as well as something beneath mortal's understanding.
Speaking of characters, they all of them are well-written. I think we all agree how interesting and relatable Richter and Lyall are, how caring and merciful Leif is, etc.
But let's talk about young heir Adrius, who is without any doubt a complete dastard. Yet his character is sort of understandable. Yes, his methods are awfully brutal, he doesn't mind getting rid even of closest people, if they are in the way of achieving goals.
Nonetheless, giving a better look on his personality, we can understand Adrius' motivation and relate to it.
Let's look from his perpective. In the past he was a cute little fawn, playing in royal garden. Everyone loved him and he loved everyone, and there was a person who shared the strongest bond with Adrius. His own mother, which was everything for him. And he lost her to some rascals, a member of royal family, the queen and his world were brutally slayed because politicians can't and seemingly don't even want to reach an agreement.
Everyone are so slow, indifferent and not caring. Even Lyall, so tall, a growing warrior, was so slow, proved to be uncapable of fulfilling his one and only duty, to protect the queen. This wolf doesn't even deserves a name. It's a dog!
That is why Adrius has to be swift, desicive and determined. Even it mean wiping out everyone on his way. He doesn't want to be anything alike this slackers all around him.
I'm not sure if he truly wants peace for the people of Lyre, but a complete change of personality is most certainly connected with his gestalt. And for that Adrius needs MORE POWER (He is the tempest that is approaching, provoking)!
Great character designs, as well as pleasant artstyle, picturesque views and great music creates a truly bewitching experience overall.
Also I find it funny enough that the game and most characters has some sort of parallel parallel with Adastra's cast :D :
Adastra-Lyre (both names given after places where plot is going on)
Parents-Tygren (divine forces playing around main scene)
Amicus—Lyall (Big caring black wolfs, both of noble families. One is himbo, other one is Geralt of Rivia)
Whole fragment where MC being imprisoned by a mad ruler and saved with his Wolf and providence itself.
Virginia—Eliza (Strong women characters, fair and capable of ruling country)
Cassius—Adrius (Vile lads with understandable motivation, both heirs)
etc.
By the way, Lyre is clearly offering us a different story. I am not 100% sure, but the inspiration by Adastra can be seen here, or vice versa.
Nevertheless, I am fond of this epic story and only looking forward for it's continuation in the next books. 8,5 of 10. Which is "Touching piece of art". Absolutely in love with it!
Im in awe due to this incredible noval, the art is wonderful and the storyline is very complex. 100% would recomend. THIS. IS. AMAZING!
Great game, can't wait to see what comes next in "Dryz"
Happy 3rd anniversary to Lyre 🎆
What an incredibly well crafted experience. The art, the worldbuilding, the music, the characters, the subtle details and the unsolved mysteries. I've enjoyed every part of this visual novel and I cannot wait for more. Thank you to the creators of this amazing journey.
hi I played Lyre and honestly I loved the characters, the story, the setting and the images I loved everything thank you very much for introducing me to a story as great and fantastic as it sounds and very honestly I can't wait for the release of Dryz I have palpitations in my stomach and it's not the palpitations of a "wolf" hunger you understand, in short I can't wait for the rest good luck , Good luck and keep it up.
Hello, I don't speak much English, so the text written in my native language will be below.
The exciting impulsive plot, soul-touching music, the sophistication of the scenes and the extreme smallness of NSFW content make this novel an amazing read. I recommend it to everyone 💗
Захватывающий импульсивный сюжет, затрагивающая душу музыка, изысканность сцен и крайняя малость NSFW контента делают данную новеллу потрясающей для прочтения. Всем её рекомендую 💗