I can always appreciate interspecies (furry/human) romance in media. So seeing Lyall and Richter together has me like. :0 Both of them are great, and I find myself especially appreciative of Richter. I suspect that he may have been groomed for his role prior to being sent to Lyre going off of the scenes with the candle and his obscured past. What a handsome couple he and Lyall make for too! Adrius easily garnered my ire from the beginning, and I was surprised Raynar permitted him to talk to him in the manner he did at the dinner table. (And just in general really) I still remember exclaiming "You little shit!" at my tablet a couple nights ago after finding out he'd killed Raynar. I look forward to seeing him grow (geddit cuz smol) and develop in future installments.
Writing quality is for the most part solid in my eyes. There were a few instances of repetitive words here and there. But nothing a bit of editing wouldn't fix of course.
"The Hunt" was living rent free in my head for a couple days after I first experienced that one chapter. Dear God. I've barely just begun to get back into furry VNs after a couple years and as it stands currently that entire scene at the quarry has got to be my favorite out of the entire VN. (And as of right now my favorite scene out of the VNs I've read this far) It's beyond words. I was and still am spellbound. The entire soundtrack is perfect and I'd be damn proud of myself if I ever managed to create something so great. Beautiful work. Other favorites of mine include "Chimera", "Aberration", "Haven (Day/Night)", and "Storm's Reign". Good stuff! Very inspirational. I absolutely love the gregorian chants and little furnishings of electronic(?) bits and industrial guitar in "Chimera" too. So friggin' awesome.
I feel like I might need another go-around with this VN in order to really soak everything in, as the experience is close to registering as a blur to me. (though this is nobody's fault but my own because my brain is just weird like that) But overall, this was great. As a creative myself, as I was reading I kept thinking about the amount of hours that must've went into this, alongside sentiments of "Holy shit I wanna make a VN one day" of course haha.
Richter and Lyall have gotten me to rethink the standing of two of my own characters for a project I hope to make in the future as well. I'd love to take a crack at my own spin on the human/furry romance trope as well. So many thanks for the inspirational fuel that my creative fire requires! And marvellous work on your first book! I eagerly look forward to what lies in store.
Lol [spoilers for the ones that havent finished yet]
I fucking loved it, i didnt expect torture or patricide from Adrius lmao, and by the end when you where hunted and almost excecuted idk why but the song Snake eater from Mtgs 3 fits it so well, lyall leaving everything behind just for you its so wholesome and heart warming that i cant stop imagine side stories and wow its a really wonderful novel, i cant wait to play Dryz, the secuel :33
Oh my god, THIS WAS AWESOME! The writing, the characters, the plot—EVERYTHING is perfect. I felt so damn angry when I realized this visual novel is part of a series, and now... I feel empty.
But overall, you did a GREAT, GREAT job! I’m waiting so desperately for the next one—I need to know more! <3 This is definitely going on my list of favorite visual novels.
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That said, there were a few aspects that felt a little "weird," like the fast-paced romance between us and Lyall. I mean, given his personality, it makes sense why we fell in love, but it still felt rushed.
Also, I’m so invested in Adrius. There’s just something about him—how he was as a child versus now—that feels... off, in an intriguing way.
I'm so glad you like it! The relationship does move fast, yes, but with intent. I'll be exploring that aspect of their relationship later. I'm also excited to write more for Adrius.
...i absolutely LOVE IT!!! its such a fine novel!!! it hooks you right into it!! I absolutely love the characters!! and the plot? THE PLOT!! the plot was the best things ive ever witnessed!!!! absolutely perfectt!!! good job!!!!
Just recently read this a few days ago and I must say this is the finest piece of literature I've ever read so far. Spot on, incredible!! And I truly mean it. And the fact that it's a Novel series is an absolute pleasure as I enjoy a good book series.
Its a record that I've managed to finish reading for only 3 days!! It took me weeks to read adastra, but this one kept me HOOKED for 3 days.
Im short this is the finest thing I've read so far and I'm excited to see more. Kudos to the creator and developers. You have my patreon support always!!
Honestly this is an amazing novel I really enjoyed every second of it. It truly was a work of art. 10000/10 I just have one thing I would like to say there is a slight grammar error that you commonly use I took bunch of screen shots but I only stared to pay attention during chaper 3 to it and kinda forgot to keep going but you are using "," wrong. You keep using something called a comma splice It's basically when every you had a Subject and Verb and complete though then you used "," and the next lines also have subject and verb and complete thought it's not proper grammar the fix to that is adding a ";" or "." But simply getting rid of "," would also lead to improper grammar of something called run on sentence.
Here's am example sorry I'm not trying to be rude or know it all I just wanted to point a common grammar mistake
So goddamn peak literature, I have developed a Lyre addiction and read through it 3 times today alone. The music, writing and art is all top tie. I was expecting a short read of mild entertainment value going in (based on what friends told me) and instead ascended to literature heaven. 10/10 would read three more times
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I can always appreciate interspecies (furry/human) romance in media. So seeing Lyall and Richter together has me like. :0 Both of them are great, and I find myself especially appreciative of Richter. I suspect that he may have been groomed for his role prior to being sent to Lyre going off of the scenes with the candle and his obscured past. What a handsome couple he and Lyall make for too! Adrius easily garnered my ire from the beginning, and I was surprised Raynar permitted him to talk to him in the manner he did at the dinner table. (And just in general really) I still remember exclaiming "You little shit!" at my tablet a couple nights ago after finding out he'd killed Raynar. I look forward to seeing him grow (geddit cuz smol) and develop in future installments.
Writing quality is for the most part solid in my eyes. There were a few instances of repetitive words here and there. But nothing a bit of editing wouldn't fix of course.
"The Hunt" was living rent free in my head for a couple days after I first experienced that one chapter. Dear God. I've barely just begun to get back into furry VNs after a couple years and as it stands currently that entire scene at the quarry has got to be my favorite out of the entire VN. (And as of right now my favorite scene out of the VNs I've read this far) It's beyond words. I was and still am spellbound. The entire soundtrack is perfect and I'd be damn proud of myself if I ever managed to create something so great. Beautiful work. Other favorites of mine include "Chimera", "Aberration", "Haven (Day/Night)", and "Storm's Reign". Good stuff! Very inspirational. I absolutely love the gregorian chants and little furnishings of electronic(?) bits and industrial guitar in "Chimera" too. So friggin' awesome.
I feel like I might need another go-around with this VN in order to really soak everything in, as the experience is close to registering as a blur to me. (though this is nobody's fault but my own because my brain is just weird like that) But overall, this was great. As a creative myself, as I was reading I kept thinking about the amount of hours that must've went into this, alongside sentiments of "Holy shit I wanna make a VN one day" of course haha.
Richter and Lyall have gotten me to rethink the standing of two of my own characters for a project I hope to make in the future as well. I'd love to take a crack at my own spin on the human/furry romance trope as well. So many thanks for the inspirational fuel that my creative fire requires! And marvellous work on your first book! I eagerly look forward to what lies in store.
LOVE THIS! Hate that little nepo deer tho he really pisses me off.
Sometimes the characters remind me of Fbtw! (far beyond the world).
Great creativity. Made my heart-sank at how powerful and mental this is!
Just disappointed that it'll end with a upcoming war smth.
I literally cannot stop squirming like an in love highschool girl after Lyall saved us from being executed
apples
I really love this vn..the writing is wonderful
Easily in my top 10( ◜‿◝ )♡
Lol [spoilers for the ones that havent finished yet]
I fucking loved it, i didnt expect torture or patricide from Adrius lmao, and by the end when you where hunted and almost excecuted idk why but the song Snake eater from Mtgs 3 fits it so well, lyall leaving everything behind just for you its so wholesome and heart warming that i cant stop imagine side stories and wow its a really wonderful novel, i cant wait to play Dryz, the secuel :33
Naughty princes get put in the woodchipper
He's decent :)
Oh my god, THIS WAS AWESOME! The writing, the characters, the plot—EVERYTHING is perfect. I felt so damn angry when I realized this visual novel is part of a series, and now... I feel empty.
But overall, you did a GREAT, GREAT job! I’m waiting so desperately for the next one—I need to know more! <3 This is definitely going on my list of favorite visual novels.
.
.
.
.
.
That said, there were a few aspects that felt a little "weird," like the fast-paced romance between us and Lyall. I mean, given his personality, it makes sense why we fell in love, but it still felt rushed.
Also, I’m so invested in Adrius. There’s just something about him—how he was as a child versus now—that feels... off, in an intriguing way.
That’s all! Keep up the amazing work!!!!
I'm so glad you like it! The relationship does move fast, yes, but with intent. I'll be exploring that aspect of their relationship later. I'm also excited to write more for Adrius.
why is tygren like kinda hot?
They're daddy kinda
...i absolutely LOVE IT!!! its such a fine novel!!! it hooks you right into it!! I absolutely love the characters!! and the plot? THE PLOT!! the plot was the best things ive ever witnessed!!!! absolutely perfectt!!! good job!!!!
Just recently read this a few days ago and I must say this is the finest piece of literature I've ever read so far. Spot on, incredible!! And I truly mean it. And the fact that it's a Novel series is an absolute pleasure as I enjoy a good book series.
Its a record that I've managed to finish reading for only 3 days!! It took me weeks to read adastra, but this one kept me HOOKED for 3 days.
Im short this is the finest thing I've read so far and I'm excited to see more. Kudos to the creator and developers. You have my patreon support always!!
Lyall is the greatest wolf character of any previous or current VN! FIGHT ME!!!
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Honestly this is an amazing novel I really enjoyed every second of it. It truly was a work of art. 10000/10 I just have one thing I would like to say there is a slight grammar error that you commonly use I took bunch of screen shots but I only stared to pay attention during chaper 3 to it and kinda forgot to keep going but you are using "," wrong. You keep using something called a comma splice It's basically when every you had a Subject and Verb and complete though then you used "," and the next lines also have subject and verb and complete thought it's not proper grammar the fix to that is adding a ";" or "." But simply getting rid of "," would also lead to improper grammar of something called run on sentence.
Here's am example sorry I'm not trying to be rude or know it all I just wanted to point a common grammar mistake
Thank you! I'm looking into potentially working with an editor who will help me fix these mistakes.
No problem. Keep up the amazing work!!
I hope that lyre DE comes out soon… I wanna see my baby boy Lyall again :(
Same here he is sooo cute i wish there was more of him
i remember the demmo of this vn and it was amazing keep up the brilliant work and make sure to get rest aswell
Thank you!
One of the best t VN I have red. Everything is peak the writing, music, and art style. 10/10 experience. I just can't wait to the next one!
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
when we will have lyre DE?
To be announced. I don't want to delay it if anything comes up.
So goddamn peak literature, I have developed a Lyre addiction and read through it 3 times today alone. The music, writing and art is all top tie. I was expecting a short read of mild entertainment value going in (based on what friends told me) and instead ascended to literature heaven. 10/10 would read three more times
Thank you!