Lol [spoilers for the ones that havent finished yet]
I fucking loved it, i didnt expect torture or patricide from Adrius lmao, and by the end when you where hunted and almost excecuted idk why but the song Snake eater from Mtgs 3 fits it so well, lyall leaving everything behind just for you its so wholesome and heart warming that i cant stop imagine side stories and wow its a really wonderful novel, i cant wait to play Dryz, the secuel :33
Oh my god, THIS WAS AWESOME! The writing, the characters, the plot—EVERYTHING is perfect. I felt so damn angry when I realized this visual novel is part of a series, and now... I feel empty.
But overall, you did a GREAT, GREAT job! I’m waiting so desperately for the next one—I need to know more! <3 This is definitely going on my list of favorite visual novels.
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That said, there were a few aspects that felt a little "weird," like the fast-paced romance between us and Lyall. I mean, given his personality, it makes sense why we fell in love, but it still felt rushed.
Also, I’m so invested in Adrius. There’s just something about him—how he was as a child versus now—that feels... off, in an intriguing way.
I'm so glad you like it! The relationship does move fast, yes, but with intent. I'll be exploring that aspect of their relationship later. I'm also excited to write more for Adrius.
...i absolutely LOVE IT!!! its such a fine novel!!! it hooks you right into it!! I absolutely love the characters!! and the plot? THE PLOT!! the plot was the best things ive ever witnessed!!!! absolutely perfectt!!! good job!!!!
Just recently read this a few days ago and I must say this is the finest piece of literature I've ever read so far. Spot on, incredible!! And I truly mean it. And the fact that it's a Novel series is an absolute pleasure as I enjoy a good book series.
Its a record that I've managed to finish reading for only 3 days!! It took me weeks to read adastra, but this one kept me HOOKED for 3 days.
Im short this is the finest thing I've read so far and I'm excited to see more. Kudos to the creator and developers. You have my patreon support always!!
Honestly this is an amazing novel I really enjoyed every second of it. It truly was a work of art. 10000/10 I just have one thing I would like to say there is a slight grammar error that you commonly use I took bunch of screen shots but I only stared to pay attention during chaper 3 to it and kinda forgot to keep going but you are using "," wrong. You keep using something called a comma splice It's basically when every you had a Subject and Verb and complete though then you used "," and the next lines also have subject and verb and complete thought it's not proper grammar the fix to that is adding a ";" or "." But simply getting rid of "," would also lead to improper grammar of something called run on sentence.
Here's am example sorry I'm not trying to be rude or know it all I just wanted to point a common grammar mistake
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Lol [spoilers for the ones that havent finished yet]
I fucking loved it, i didnt expect torture or patricide from Adrius lmao, and by the end when you where hunted and almost excecuted idk why but the song Snake eater from Mtgs 3 fits it so well, lyall leaving everything behind just for you its so wholesome and heart warming that i cant stop imagine side stories and wow its a really wonderful novel, i cant wait to play Dryz, the secuel :33
Naughty princes get put in the woodchipper
He's decent :)
Oh my god, THIS WAS AWESOME! The writing, the characters, the plot—EVERYTHING is perfect. I felt so damn angry when I realized this visual novel is part of a series, and now... I feel empty.
But overall, you did a GREAT, GREAT job! I’m waiting so desperately for the next one—I need to know more! <3 This is definitely going on my list of favorite visual novels.
.
.
.
.
.
That said, there were a few aspects that felt a little "weird," like the fast-paced romance between us and Lyall. I mean, given his personality, it makes sense why we fell in love, but it still felt rushed.
Also, I’m so invested in Adrius. There’s just something about him—how he was as a child versus now—that feels... off, in an intriguing way.
That’s all! Keep up the amazing work!!!!
I'm so glad you like it! The relationship does move fast, yes, but with intent. I'll be exploring that aspect of their relationship later. I'm also excited to write more for Adrius.
why is tygren like kinda hot?
They're daddy kinda
...i absolutely LOVE IT!!! its such a fine novel!!! it hooks you right into it!! I absolutely love the characters!! and the plot? THE PLOT!! the plot was the best things ive ever witnessed!!!! absolutely perfectt!!! good job!!!!
Just recently read this a few days ago and I must say this is the finest piece of literature I've ever read so far. Spot on, incredible!! And I truly mean it. And the fact that it's a Novel series is an absolute pleasure as I enjoy a good book series.
Its a record that I've managed to finish reading for only 3 days!! It took me weeks to read adastra, but this one kept me HOOKED for 3 days.
Im short this is the finest thing I've read so far and I'm excited to see more. Kudos to the creator and developers. You have my patreon support always!!
Lyall is the greatest wolf character of any previous or current VN! FIGHT ME!!!
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Honestly this is an amazing novel I really enjoyed every second of it. It truly was a work of art. 10000/10 I just have one thing I would like to say there is a slight grammar error that you commonly use I took bunch of screen shots but I only stared to pay attention during chaper 3 to it and kinda forgot to keep going but you are using "," wrong. You keep using something called a comma splice It's basically when every you had a Subject and Verb and complete though then you used "," and the next lines also have subject and verb and complete thought it's not proper grammar the fix to that is adding a ";" or "." But simply getting rid of "," would also lead to improper grammar of something called run on sentence.
Here's am example sorry I'm not trying to be rude or know it all I just wanted to point a common grammar mistake
Thank you! I'm looking into potentially working with an editor who will help me fix these mistakes.
No problem. Keep up the amazing work!!
I hope that lyre DE comes out soon… I wanna see my baby boy Lyall again :(
Same here he is sooo cute i wish there was more of him