This is a pretty great game! I know a lot of people compare it to FBTW but I love the writing of this one way more, it feels like a much more natural progression between a captain wolf and a human. Ranok constantly nannying you and worrying about you even though he barely knows you while Lyall lets you be your own person and he grows to like your company and be more comfortable around you.
I was following this VN for the past few months. I actually liked it quite a bit. The rosy and blue setting is beautiful, the majority of the characters act rather dignified, sophisticated, dependable, and mature (which is something that many other VNs abandon, unfortunately), and the music is dope af.
I did not play the 1.6 update yet, but I have some questions and ideas.
Wouldn't the leaves in the backgrounds connect to each other via stems? It would make more sense than having them detached and floating in the air.
Why does Lyall sparkle? Artistic choice?
I think the bottom of the windows could be slightly lower. The outside should be more visible.
Will there be skating, sledding, maple syrup chocolate (idk if Lyall can have that) pumpkin spice latte, or other wintry things? I think it is more immersive to ease the reader into the weather and daily activities of the characters during winter, especially as a build-up to the ball. You are already doing a good job describing autumn from the previous update.
I am suspecting that the Winter Solstice Ball would end up like a Cinderella-like dance between Lyall and the human. Oh man, that would be amazing and so romantic. Would it have winter-themed stuff like red ribbons, snowflake cut-outs, Christmas trees or some unique winter tradition, etc.?
Are Lyall and the human virgins? I hope they are.
I know you are still building the plot, as well as the world, politics, conflicts, character developments, sprites and backgrounds, and more. As others have stated, take your time. Life and school take top priority.
This comment may not be appreciated, but I decided to write it anyway since I am in the same boat as those below me. I would appreciate a regular schedule instead of checking up on it every few days.
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Suppose you want to make monthly releases like most other VNs. And you put in 5 hours of work every day for 23 or 24 days a month. You have about 115-120 hrs of work. You can assign categories like writing the VNs text, drawing background/sprite images, and then proof reading and fixing bugs. Then assign the number of hours to each. If you make sure youre always giving 75hrs of text time each month you can assume you will always get the same number of words coded in and ensuring readers have a consistent time reading each build. If you have the final text ready and chapters done you can average out the number of words per chapter and then assign working hours to get it done. If it is a longer chapter that is no big deal. You might be forced into using placeholder sprites and backgrounds but there will come a time to upload a smaller chapter (thats how averaging works) and the time you lost on images before can be made up now. As said, if you are done with the draft of the whole story and know what backgrounds/sprites you will need you can allot your remaining time in the month wisely so it ensures consistency with releases. Maybe you dont have 5 hours to spare every day but I am sure you can figure it out if your schedule is different. GL with it and sorry to assume you arent already very well organized.
The game is free and not a job. We can wait however long it takes, since the developer's real life always takes the priority. And the game is worth the wait.
Your "advice" is free, but not wanted, nor is it accurate. Your assumptions are down right terrible. You should have stopped right when you typed "This comment may not be appreciated".
Omg, don't even get me started on that pile of garbage, I wish there were another place where I could download the game instead of having to go through that itch.io page, but I guess I can deal with it since the game is definitely worth it
You're acting as if writing this VN is some sort of job, I'm fairly sure that the reason the writer decided to make this story was for fun. Implementing a schedule for a hobby project is totally unnecessary ESPECIALLY when it takes away from the fun of writing and adds pressure for no good reason.
This is a very beautiful visual novel💚😆. It made me enter the world of sounds and characters. The story is very beautiful. Thank you for this amazing work🥰. I look forward to the next updates.🏃🏽♂️🏃🏽♂️🌚❤️
Yo, i recently found this VN from reddit, and already I'm in love with it XD, I love the character designs, the dialogue, the set design ( i guess it's how one would call it) is beautiful, and the plot which is very interesting.
I have a question: is the dinner the main character goes to the end of this update? That is where mine ends, I am using an android device if that helps.
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The plot thickens.....
every time i try to run the program it closes
can anyone help?
I have a problem, on mobile touch doesnt work so have to go on a pc
finally, a human furry VN protagonist that I don't want to throat punch.🗦 ^ω^ 🗧
HOLY FUCK THIS VN IS SO FUCKIN GOOD LIKE YES PLEASE KEEP THIS TOP TIER SHIT COMING!!
Alcohol, a great enemy or ally depending on the situation.
AYE AYE AYE YOW MC CHILL YO ASS DOWN IT HAS BEEN LIKE 2-3 DAYS AND YOU BE LIKE THIS:
IM LIKE WHATTT!?
It's actually been longer than that....
It's been longer than 2-3 days. Chapter 3 skips forward a week and so does chapter 4.
Oh... I didn't notice :O
Is there a NFW scene in the game
Yes, so far there has been one nude scene.
This is a pretty great game! I know a lot of people compare it to FBTW but I love the writing of this one way more, it feels like a much more natural progression between a captain wolf and a human. Ranok constantly nannying you and worrying about you even though he barely knows you while Lyall lets you be your own person and he grows to like your company and be more comfortable around you.
Looking forward to reading future updates :)
I love this and can't wait for more
looks softer and warmer, both attractive~
Im laughing at myself for how similar our names are lol. Especially when im narrating myself😆
Brilliant so Far! Well done!
Lyall got me thinking all kinds of ways *uwu*
John is cool but Lyall is best mans.
I was following this VN for the past few months. I actually liked it quite a bit. The rosy and blue setting is beautiful, the majority of the characters act rather dignified, sophisticated, dependable, and mature (which is something that many other VNs abandon, unfortunately), and the music is dope af.
I did not play the 1.6 update yet, but I have some questions and ideas.
Wouldn't the leaves in the backgrounds connect to each other via stems? It would make more sense than having them detached and floating in the air.
Why does Lyall sparkle? Artistic choice?
I think the bottom of the windows could be slightly lower. The outside should be more visible.
Will there be skating, sledding, maple syrup chocolate (idk if Lyall can have that) pumpkin spice latte, or other wintry things? I think it is more immersive to ease the reader into the weather and daily activities of the characters during winter, especially as a build-up to the ball. You are already doing a good job describing autumn from the previous update.
I am suspecting that the Winter Solstice Ball would end up like a Cinderella-like dance between Lyall and the human. Oh man, that would be amazing and so romantic. Would it have winter-themed stuff like red ribbons, snowflake cut-outs, Christmas trees or some unique winter tradition, etc.?
Are Lyall and the human virgins? I hope they are.
I know you are still building the plot, as well as the world, politics, conflicts, character developments, sprites and backgrounds, and more. As others have stated, take your time. Life and school take top priority.
Most of this is artistic choice. The leaves aren't floating, they're just stylized.
I also can't confirm your suspicions.
I have to stay true to the time period and themes. This is a fantasy world and winter is celebrated differently.
I don't know if I'm getting fairytale ball or red wedding vibes and I love it
oh no john's so cute... lyall might have a rival...
I WAS JUST ABOUT TO TYPE THAT
Ima just add this to my small collection of 30 visual novels 😏
👀
I’m SOO Excited for the update 🌚🏃🏽♂️🏃🏽♂️😆
gonna wait the 2 days for the update before i play :3
so happy about the update!
CAN'T WAIT!!
I haven't read through the last 3 updates and i forgor, is the MC a human or what?
(also the save screen tiles are so fucking cute)
Yes, the MC is a human.
I should probably figure out a way to clarify this in the description of the game, lol.
Apparently so 😂😂
He forgor 💀
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This comment may not be appreciated, but I decided to write it anyway since I am in the same boat as those below me. I would appreciate a regular schedule instead of checking up on it every few days.
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Suppose you want to make monthly releases like most other VNs. And you put in 5 hours of work every day for 23 or 24 days a month. You have about 115-120 hrs of work. You can assign categories like writing the VNs text, drawing background/sprite images, and then proof reading and fixing bugs. Then assign the number of hours to each. If you make sure youre always giving 75hrs of text time each month you can assume you will always get the same number of words coded in and ensuring readers have a consistent time reading each build. If you have the final text ready and chapters done you can average out the number of words per chapter and then assign working hours to get it done. If it is a longer chapter that is no big deal. You might be forced into using placeholder sprites and backgrounds but there will come a time to upload a smaller chapter (thats how averaging works) and the time you lost on images before can be made up now. As said, if you are done with the draft of the whole story and know what backgrounds/sprites you will need you can allot your remaining time in the month wisely so it ensures consistency with releases. Maybe you dont have 5 hours to spare every day but I am sure you can figure it out if your schedule is different. GL with it and sorry to assume you arent already very well organized.
It's free, we can wait
Yeah and my advice was free too, but I get a lot of downvotes for it.
That may be because your advice is... what is the word? Oh yes, flawed.
Free and wanted aren't the same thing.
The game is free and not a job. We can wait however long it takes, since the developer's real life always takes the priority. And the game is worth the wait.
Your "advice" is free, but not wanted, nor is it accurate. Your assumptions are down right terrible. You should have stopped right when you typed "This comment may not be appreciated".
You should see what it's over in Far Beyond The World comments, it's horrible.
Omg, don't even get me started on that pile of garbage, I wish there were another place where I could download the game instead of having to go through that itch.io page, but I guess I can deal with it since the game is definitely worth it
You're acting as if writing this VN is some sort of job, I'm fairly sure that the reason the writer decided to make this story was for fun. Implementing a schedule for a hobby project is totally unnecessary ESPECIALLY when it takes away from the fun of writing and adds pressure for no good reason.
Exactly, thank you. Some people literally feel entitled to everything.
Played the game and its so adorable!! I liked the art style and story too, i can’t wait for another chapterr
Is there a confirmed date for the next update yet? If there isn't that's fine, I'm just curious.
Im not Shure, but i think we will get it this month, don't quote me on that though, i could be wrong
This is a very beautiful visual novel💚😆. It made me enter the world of sounds and characters. The story is very beautiful. Thank you for this amazing work🥰. I look forward to the next updates.🏃🏽♂️🏃🏽♂️🌚❤️
definitly gonna make this a wallpaper
Maybe I'm imagining what it looks like wrong but I don't understand this. Pls explain
It's a loose shirt, that's oviously not how his arm is shaped XD, it's just the shirt folding that way, it could also be shoulder pads
The sleeve is just sagging a bit because it's a loose shirt.
Artistic choice. Or maybe he just has very fluffy shoulders on top of being very muscular.
It's actually the shirt being loose , atmac up there is the author, so he should know XD
Yo, i recently found this VN from reddit, and already I'm in love with it XD, I love the character designs, the dialogue, the set design ( i guess it's how one would call it) is beautiful, and the plot which is very interesting.
I'm totes excited for the next update!
Im gonna ask the dumbest question...
Is th protag a human?
Yes.
Yes
When is the next update coming?
I give regular updates on Twitter, but the next build will be released some time this month.
o ok. Thank you and can't wait for the update. Love your game
I have a question: is the dinner the main character goes to the end of this update? That is where mine ends, I am using an android device if that helps.
No, that is the ending of build 2. Build 3 is the latest build. I would try redownloading the android build that you have.
That did the trick thanks!! 🙂🙂
I'm glad it worked!
How charming :) A love story about a gay knight captain and gay lord
Gayception.