I just finished Chapter 12 and holy hell did I cry and feel a ton of emotions. Great characters, stunning art pieces and a good, hearty length so far. Can't wait for this to be finished.
Definitely a good read. You have my props and recommendations.
I always found that self insert in some VNs is a little malfunctional, mainly cause the writer tends to sculpt the personality for the reader, so what point is a self insert if it's not yourself?
Very wonderful read, you have my props and recommendations ^^
For me when it comes to naming in cases of non-self inserts, it makes it easier for the main character to stand out in cases where a VN may use an ambiguous or similar name to other characters where early on it can make it harder to follow wen there are many characters on screen at the same time. Beyond that, this is a uncommon issue to encounter since it often requires a lot of dialogue intensive content with multiple characters early on, thus not giving enough time for the user to identify with the naming of the main character.
Amazing! I was hooked from the start, from OC's innocent character to Lyall's rough looks and attitude, I love it! I can't wait to see more of this superb novel, and I'm excited to see how it ends
i feel so many things, but mostly, good job on rendering an accurate portrayal of a genuine psychopath as seen in the character of adrian. those tender scenes with lyall thruout the vn are also very precious, 10/10 always need more
Soo...first ever playthrough just finished up to current chapter as time of writing (12)
-no spoilers ahead-
From the very beginning it had me captivated from the beautiful artwork to the incredibly written story telling. It had really good set-up to ease you into the game and the narrative. Each character, main and side, are so well flushed out, full of life and personality. The plot hooks are very well done to keep you thinking and keep you captivated.
Overall, 100% worth playing if you haven't already (which I assume most have). I'm very excited to see where the story goes, and will for sure be coming back with each update. Well done so far to everyone working on this game, amazing truly!
I've gotta say, I was a little unsure how I felt about this VN initially when I first started and played the first few chapters... but the writing has improved SO much over the latest few chapters and I've been left HOOKED. The pacing and story telling was absolutely perfect in chapters 9-12. Can't wait for the next chapter!! :D
I got so exhausted just reading the new chapter. My face got so hot I feel like I'm gonna have a fever. The only thing left I can say is: You need a fucking content warning on this VN
it really well worth the wait and torture, I have to admit the last chapter I have read for several time just to feel the power of run for life, knid remind me Max from Strange things though. by the way I find recommend project like one last night it's pretty cool too, you guys it's really amazing.
spoilers beneath
P.S. is the evil prince get possessed by some evil gods cause only gods words go with a strange sounds? kinda like sound effect in Undertale
(Literal) torture but worth that payoff at the end! Kudos especially to that final musical composition, proper got me saying "hell yeah, beat feet my dude!". My one qualm, knowing absolutely when it faded to black, saying "don't you do it, don't you da- *to be continued* DAMMIT". I'll be back for more!
Jesus Christ! This latest update had me sweating like I've just ran a marathon. And I'm sitting in my underwear. Now that's a sign of brilliant story writing.
Even though Chapter 12 was quite a wait from Chapter 11, what an woooonderful visual novel! The world building, character building, story telling- the music especially~... everything is so on point and it leads to a suspenseful yet fulfilling story that also has it's own little charm of uniqueness. I can't wait to see where Atmac and the team take this novel considering that they've written a compelling story thus far. What an amazing novel.
I knew it! As soon as Liz said someone had already sent out the Headsman, I knew it was Lyall. I've been waiting and wondering "how is Lyall going to show up" and you definitely made it worth waiting for. I have to admit I nearly cried seeing the art at the end too!
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HYPE
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I just finished reading and i would like to say that i love lyall so much
AND the transition at the end gave me chills bro the soundtrack too!!
looking forward to dryz! ❤️ ❤️
I just reread it and I'm so excited for chapter 13, it's coming out tmrr
I just finished Chapter 12 and holy hell did I cry and feel a ton of emotions. Great characters, stunning art pieces and a good, hearty length so far. Can't wait for this to be finished.
Definitely a good read. You have my props and recommendations.
^^
I always found that self insert in some VNs is a little malfunctional, mainly cause the writer tends to sculpt the personality for the reader, so what point is a self insert if it's not yourself?
Very wonderful read, you have my props and recommendations ^^
For me when it comes to naming in cases of non-self inserts, it makes it easier for the main character to stand out in cases where a VN may use an ambiguous or similar name to other characters where early on it can make it harder to follow wen there are many characters on screen at the same time. Beyond that, this is a uncommon issue to encounter since it often requires a lot of dialogue intensive content with multiple characters early on, thus not giving enough time for the user to identify with the naming of the main character.
And another one bites the dust. The self insert was the thing that made me want to play the game. Dont enjoy VNs with named protags.
Very telling...
You're very welcome :)
A shame the self inserty bit will be removed but its understandable. I guess I just enjoy hot wolf men saying my name lol
The main character will still be a sort of vessel for the reader in that regard, but the name will need to be kept as Richter.
Only 1 more month till the release of Ch.13 guys. I hope all goes well.
It's $1 you guys should just get the patreon update It's super worth it.
True, but the public update will be a bit more polished.
Amazing! I was hooked from the start, from OC's innocent character to Lyall's rough looks and attitude, I love it! I can't wait to see more of this superb novel, and I'm excited to see how it ends
NEW CHAPTER
just a quick question, what does it mean that it is the end of the first book? Is Lyre ending and there will be someday Lyre 2 or Lyre's sequel?
Yes there will be 3 books
NEW CHAPTER
I'm waiting for the next chapter ^^
Holy dang chapter 12!! I want more!! ;w;
Cant wait for the next update uggggggggg it's gonna hit so hard.
hocus pocus his ass made me lose focus
Thank you for making my day with this comment.
Great story
I first thought there were going to be choices for alternative ends or paths
Despite there not being any choices I was far from disappointed
chapter 12 holy shit WHAT
OMG
i feel so many things, but mostly, good job on rendering an accurate portrayal of a genuine psychopath as seen in the character of adrian. those tender scenes with lyall thruout the vn are also very precious, 10/10 always need more
Soo...first ever playthrough just finished up to current chapter as time of writing (12)
-no spoilers ahead-
From the very beginning it had me captivated from the beautiful artwork to the incredibly written story telling. It had really good set-up to ease you into the game and the narrative. Each character, main and side, are so well flushed out, full of life and personality. The plot hooks are very well done to keep you thinking and keep you captivated.
Overall, 100% worth playing if you haven't already (which I assume most have). I'm very excited to see where the story goes, and will for sure be coming back with each update. Well done so far to everyone working on this game, amazing truly!
I've gotta say, I was a little unsure how I felt about this VN initially when I first started and played the first few chapters... but the writing has improved SO much over the latest few chapters and I've been left HOOKED. The pacing and story telling was absolutely perfect in chapters 9-12. Can't wait for the next chapter!! :D
just finished chapter 12.. screaming. crying. throwing up. omg that was so worth the wait. now let me curl up in a corner of my room and sob about it.
Thank you for this. I didn't want to have to screenshot it myself.
sry my bad
It's alright. I need to get around to making the warnings a bit more specific some time soon. I'm just struggling to figure out how to word it.
I did tag it with "intense violence", but I suppose being a little more specific couldn't hurt. I plan to update the warning soon.
Still, it was a fair warning. I dont really think I deserve the attitude. 😕
Chapter 12 Spoilers!
Did anyone else see the MC running through the flowers as a D4C reference??
What is D4C?
Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap, from JoJo
I haven't read JOJO, only watched it. I know what stand you're talking about though.
Tygren finished reading part 7 and decided to take inspiration for his move at the end haha
I was hoping Adrius would get a redemption arc, but after reading Chapter 12, maybe that's a little too generous for him.
Whenever I go to update the VN on my phone, its keeps throwing me this error
The only thing that seems to work is deleting the app from my phone and then installing the update, but that deletes my save data in the process!
I'm using a Galaxy Note 10+ running Android 12 (don't know the specific version)
Took me 3 days to read up until chapter 12 and boy oh boy was it a rollercoaster. The writing is AMAZING. Can't wait for Chapter 13.
Can't wait for the next chapter pls make it soon
I got so exhausted just reading the new chapter. My face got so hot I feel like I'm gonna have a fever. The only thing left I can say is: You need a fucking content warning on this VN
You're right. I should update the warning at the beginning. Apologies.
I figured "adult content" would also include violence, but I now realize I should be more specific.
i finished adastra a few days ago. this is what i need to take my mind of it. hope i don't fall into a "post lyre depression"
Reading this after adastra? Praying for your mental health
thats a great sign
AMICUS AVOCADO
yes. amicus avicado or as i call him
avcadoius
it really well worth the wait and torture, I have to admit the last chapter I have read for several time just to feel the power of run for life, knid remind me Max from Strange things though. by the way I find recommend project like one last night it's pretty cool too, you guys it's really amazing.
spoilers beneath
P.S. is the evil prince get possessed by some evil gods cause only gods words go with a strange sounds? kinda like sound effect in Undertale
(Literal) torture but worth that payoff at the end! Kudos especially to that final musical composition, proper got me saying "hell yeah, beat feet my dude!". My one qualm, knowing absolutely when it faded to black, saying "don't you do it, don't you da- *to be continued* DAMMIT". I'll be back for more!
Jesus Christ! This latest update had me sweating like I've just ran a marathon. And I'm sitting in my underwear. Now that's a sign of brilliant story writing.
Even though Chapter 12 was quite a wait from Chapter 11, what an woooonderful visual novel! The world building, character building, story telling- the music especially~... everything is so on point and it leads to a suspenseful yet fulfilling story that also has it's own little charm of uniqueness. I can't wait to see where Atmac and the team take this novel considering that they've written a compelling story thus far. What an amazing novel.
I knew it! As soon as Liz said someone had already sent out the Headsman, I knew it was Lyall. I've been waiting and wondering "how is Lyall going to show up" and you definitely made it worth waiting for. I have to admit I nearly cried seeing the art at the end too!
Oh my god the rush i got when i realized it was Lyall !!!!!!
Best update ever !
this is epic!
That was amazing!