There is only one word I can think of to describe this project, beautiful. The characters you've made, the world you've built, and the story you've forged, all of it is beautiful. I can without a doubt say this is my favorite visual novel/book I have every read.
Thank you so much for sharing your creation and I am beyond exited for book 2.
This was beautiful. Many visual novels focus too much on one aspect or another but here you have struck an impeccable balance. The story is powerful and supported by beautiful artwork and then also supported through the movements of the music. Some go overboard on their CG's and artwork that detracts from the story and even feel completely alien all together or using music that makes it hard to concentrate. Others go so into their story that they forget that the visual novel needs supporting elements. But this was just riding that line beautifully. All of us are looking forward the next book in you and your team's journey.
nope, they're two different ppl. Alverton was the one who started this connection with Tygren and after his death the onnection just was being passed to other people
Your dedication and hard work on your first book are truly inspiring! The effort you've invested in crafting this story, evident in the stunning artwork, enchanting music tracks, and attention to detail, is remarkable. Your commitment to creating an immersive experience for your readers shines through every aspect of the novel. Congratulations on this incredible milestone! Wishing you continued success in your journey as a storyteller, and may your future endeavors be just as rewarding and fulfilling!
To say the least; AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
I loved this so much, and ecstatic for each update! The characters, the OST, the CGs, the writing and story, all so GOOD!
One of the BEST VNs I’ve read, and probably my favorite!
I’m VERY excited for Dryz!
I just finished Chapter 12 and holy hell did I cry and feel a ton of emotions. Great characters, stunning art pieces and a good, hearty length so far. Can't wait for this to be finished.
Definitely a good read. You have my props and recommendations.
I always found that self insert in some VNs is a little malfunctional, mainly cause the writer tends to sculpt the personality for the reader, so what point is a self insert if it's not yourself?
Very wonderful read, you have my props and recommendations ^^
For me when it comes to naming in cases of non-self inserts, it makes it easier for the main character to stand out in cases where a VN may use an ambiguous or similar name to other characters where early on it can make it harder to follow wen there are many characters on screen at the same time. Beyond that, this is a uncommon issue to encounter since it often requires a lot of dialogue intensive content with multiple characters early on, thus not giving enough time for the user to identify with the naming of the main character.
Amazing! I was hooked from the start, from OC's innocent character to Lyall's rough looks and attitude, I love it! I can't wait to see more of this superb novel, and I'm excited to see how it ends
i feel so many things, but mostly, good job on rendering an accurate portrayal of a genuine psychopath as seen in the character of adrian. those tender scenes with lyall thruout the vn are also very precious, 10/10 always need more
Soo...first ever playthrough just finished up to current chapter as time of writing (12)
-no spoilers ahead-
From the very beginning it had me captivated from the beautiful artwork to the incredibly written story telling. It had really good set-up to ease you into the game and the narrative. Each character, main and side, are so well flushed out, full of life and personality. The plot hooks are very well done to keep you thinking and keep you captivated.
Overall, 100% worth playing if you haven't already (which I assume most have). I'm very excited to see where the story goes, and will for sure be coming back with each update. Well done so far to everyone working on this game, amazing truly!
I've gotta say, I was a little unsure how I felt about this VN initially when I first started and played the first few chapters... but the writing has improved SO much over the latest few chapters and I've been left HOOKED. The pacing and story telling was absolutely perfect in chapters 9-12. Can't wait for the next chapter!! :D
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Beautiful! just stunning bravo
I love how a selling point for the plush is that he has magnets in both hands "He can pick it up!" like even the text was proud of the little man
He can do it and he does it so well <3
Such a great vn! Enjoyed the first book to the very end and can't wait for what's to come! Keep up the fantastic work!
There is only one word I can think of to describe this project, beautiful. The characters you've made, the world you've built, and the story you've forged, all of it is beautiful. I can without a doubt say this is my favorite visual novel/book I have every read.
Thank you so much for sharing your creation and I am beyond exited for book 2.
This was beautiful. Many visual novels focus too much on one aspect or another but here you have struck an impeccable balance. The story is powerful and supported by beautiful artwork and then also supported through the movements of the music. Some go overboard on their CG's and artwork that detracts from the story and even feel completely alien all together or using music that makes it hard to concentrate. Others go so into their story that they forget that the visual novel needs supporting elements. But this was just riding that line beautifully. All of us are looking forward the next book in you and your team's journey.
Thank you for being awesome.
Does Richter was Alverton in a previous life ?
nope, they're two different ppl. Alverton was the one who started this connection with Tygren and after his death the onnection just was being passed to other people
Dear Atmac
Your dedication and hard work on your first book are truly inspiring! The effort you've invested in crafting this story, evident in the stunning artwork, enchanting music tracks, and attention to detail, is remarkable. Your commitment to creating an immersive experience for your readers shines through every aspect of the novel. Congratulations on this incredible milestone! Wishing you continued success in your journey as a storyteller, and may your future endeavors be just as rewarding and fulfilling!
And a big shout out to your team
Have happy marry Christmas and a new year
(Ps : if you celebrate the one)
Sincerely
Ray 🖤🔥
Thank you very much
🖤🔥
To say the least; AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
I loved this so much, and ecstatic for each update! The characters, the OST, the CGs, the writing and story, all so GOOD! One of the BEST VNs I’ve read, and probably my favorite! I’m VERY excited for Dryz!
Thank you for making Lyre!❤️
.....book 2...we gotta see this..
aw that's it for book one
I'm not sure if this is normal, but Windows detected a Trojan after I unzipped the game?
(Just downloaded Ch. 13 btw)
I changed the executable image. I've heard that windows defender can be weird about icons that use python. The game itself is completely safe.
Alright. Thanks for letting me know! Windows can be a real pain sometimes..
HYPE
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I just finished reading and i would like to say that i love lyall so much
AND the transition at the end gave me chills bro the soundtrack too!!
looking forward to dryz! ❤️ ❤️
I just reread it and I'm so excited for chapter 13, it's coming out tmrr
I just finished Chapter 12 and holy hell did I cry and feel a ton of emotions. Great characters, stunning art pieces and a good, hearty length so far. Can't wait for this to be finished.
Definitely a good read. You have my props and recommendations.
^^
I always found that self insert in some VNs is a little malfunctional, mainly cause the writer tends to sculpt the personality for the reader, so what point is a self insert if it's not yourself?
Very wonderful read, you have my props and recommendations ^^
For me when it comes to naming in cases of non-self inserts, it makes it easier for the main character to stand out in cases where a VN may use an ambiguous or similar name to other characters where early on it can make it harder to follow wen there are many characters on screen at the same time. Beyond that, this is a uncommon issue to encounter since it often requires a lot of dialogue intensive content with multiple characters early on, thus not giving enough time for the user to identify with the naming of the main character.
And another one bites the dust. The self insert was the thing that made me want to play the game. Dont enjoy VNs with named protags.
Very telling...
damn
Bey bey naming feature Rip🥲🥲🥲
thank you atmac for making this amazing game.
You're very welcome :)
A shame the self inserty bit will be removed but its understandable. I guess I just enjoy hot wolf men saying my name lol
The main character will still be a sort of vessel for the reader in that regard, but the name will need to be kept as Richter.
Only 1 more month till the release of Ch.13 guys. I hope all goes well.
It's $1 you guys should just get the patreon update It's super worth it.
True, but the public update will be a bit more polished.
Amazing! I was hooked from the start, from OC's innocent character to Lyall's rough looks and attitude, I love it! I can't wait to see more of this superb novel, and I'm excited to see how it ends
NEW CHAPTER
just a quick question, what does it mean that it is the end of the first book? Is Lyre ending and there will be someday Lyre 2 or Lyre's sequel?
Yes there will be 3 books
NEW CHAPTER
I'm waiting for the next chapter ^^
Holy dang chapter 12!! I want more!! ;w;
Cant wait for the next update uggggggggg it's gonna hit so hard.
Great story def amizing story line and very well written the visual art is superb i love the background's so much
Spoiler down below
My hatred stands for a reson ok
Hope that son of bish prince get's what he deserves ☠️
hocus pocus his ass made me lose focus
Thank you for making my day with this comment.
Great story
I first thought there were going to be choices for alternative ends or paths
Despite there not being any choices I was far from disappointed
chapter 12 holy shit WHAT
OMG
i feel so many things, but mostly, good job on rendering an accurate portrayal of a genuine psychopath as seen in the character of adrian. those tender scenes with lyall thruout the vn are also very precious, 10/10 always need more
Soo...first ever playthrough just finished up to current chapter as time of writing (12)
-no spoilers ahead-
From the very beginning it had me captivated from the beautiful artwork to the incredibly written story telling. It had really good set-up to ease you into the game and the narrative. Each character, main and side, are so well flushed out, full of life and personality. The plot hooks are very well done to keep you thinking and keep you captivated.
Overall, 100% worth playing if you haven't already (which I assume most have). I'm very excited to see where the story goes, and will for sure be coming back with each update. Well done so far to everyone working on this game, amazing truly!
I've gotta say, I was a little unsure how I felt about this VN initially when I first started and played the first few chapters... but the writing has improved SO much over the latest few chapters and I've been left HOOKED. The pacing and story telling was absolutely perfect in chapters 9-12. Can't wait for the next chapter!! :D
just finished chapter 12.. screaming. crying. throwing up. omg that was so worth the wait. now let me curl up in a corner of my room and sob about it.
Thank you for this. I didn't want to have to screenshot it myself.
sry my bad
It's alright. I need to get around to making the warnings a bit more specific some time soon. I'm just struggling to figure out how to word it.
I did tag it with "intense violence", but I suppose being a little more specific couldn't hurt. I plan to update the warning soon.
Still, it was a fair warning. I dont really think I deserve the attitude. 😕
Chapter 12 Spoilers!
Did anyone else see the MC running through the flowers as a D4C reference??
What is D4C?
Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap, from JoJo
I haven't read JOJO, only watched it. I know what stand you're talking about though.
Tygren finished reading part 7 and decided to take inspiration for his move at the end haha
I was hoping Adrius would get a redemption arc, but after reading Chapter 12, maybe that's a little too generous for him.
Whenever I go to update the VN on my phone, its keeps throwing me this error
The only thing that seems to work is deleting the app from my phone and then installing the update, but that deletes my save data in the process!
I'm using a Galaxy Note 10+ running Android 12 (don't know the specific version)
Took me 3 days to read up until chapter 12 and boy oh boy was it a rollercoaster. The writing is AMAZING. Can't wait for Chapter 13.