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the cuteness from Lyall is overpowering

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didn't play the game game but I wanna say the art reminds me of hilda (and thats very good)

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I absolutely Loved watching this story unfold, and can't wait for more!

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I just have one thing to say. Well done atmac. <3

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Just finished Lyre, and oh my is it one of THE best VN story I've ever read, not to mention the background and music is such an amazing addition! 

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I just finished reading Lyre. What a wonderful story. Amazing art and incredible music. Congratulation to all the team involved on this project.

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What a journey! Still hurts to know that it has ended but I'll definitely be looking foward to the sequel >.<

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Wow, just... Wow 😌 what a wild journey this has been, and it's only just begun! 😁 Thank xou so much for all the hard work xou've put into creating Lyre. Here's to the next chapter ☺️

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ok, so just finished the new update. I struggle for the words.  Seeing things arriving this far is pure joy. Loved what you did with the credit by the way, I squealed quite a lot. Masterful writing there.

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Congrats on going gold! I just finished reading a few minutes ago. Excited for your future projects!

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Beautiful! just stunning bravo

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I love how a selling point for the plush is that he has magnets in both hands "He can pick it up!" like even the text was proud of the little man

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He can do it and he does it so well <3

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Such a great vn! Enjoyed the first book to the very end and can't wait for what's to come! Keep up the fantastic work!

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There is only one word I can think of to describe this project, beautiful. The characters you've made, the world you've built, and the story you've forged, all of it is beautiful. I can without a doubt say this is my favorite visual novel/book I have every read.

Thank you so much for sharing your creation and I am beyond exited for book 2.

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This was beautiful. Many visual novels focus too much on one aspect or another but here you have struck an impeccable balance. The story is powerful and supported by beautiful artwork and then also supported through the movements of the music. Some go overboard on their CG's and artwork that detracts from the story and even feel completely alien all together or using music that makes it hard to concentrate.  Others go so into their story that they forget that the visual novel needs supporting elements. But this was just riding that line beautifully. All of us are looking forward the next book in you and your team's journey. 

Thank you for being awesome.

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Does Richter was Alverton in a previous life ?

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nope, they're two different ppl. Alverton was the one who started this connection with Tygren and after his death the onnection just was being passed to other people

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Dear Atmac

Your dedication and hard work on your first book are truly inspiring! The effort you've invested in crafting this story, evident in the stunning artwork, enchanting music tracks, and attention to detail, is remarkable. Your commitment to creating an immersive experience for your readers shines through every aspect of the novel. Congratulations on this incredible milestone! Wishing you continued success in your journey as a storyteller, and may your future endeavors be just as rewarding and fulfilling!

And a big shout out to your team

Have happy marry Christmas and a new year

(Ps : if you celebrate the one) 

Sincerely

Ray 🖤🔥

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Thank you very much

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🖤🔥

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To say the least; AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!

I loved this so much, and ecstatic for each update! The characters, the OST, the CGs, the writing and story, all so GOOD! One of the BEST VNs I’ve read, and probably my favorite! I’m VERY excited for Dryz!

Thank you for making Lyre!❤️

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.....book 2...we gotta see this..

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aw that's it for book one 

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I'm not sure if this is normal, but Windows detected a Trojan after I unzipped the game?

(Just downloaded Ch. 13 btw)

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I changed the executable image. I've heard that windows defender can be weird about icons that use python. The game itself is completely safe.

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Alright. Thanks for letting me know! Windows can be a real pain sometimes..

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HYPE

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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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I just finished reading and i would like to say that i love lyall so much

AND the transition at the end gave me chills bro the soundtrack too!!

looking forward to dryz! ❤️ ❤️ 

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I just reread it and I'm so excited for chapter 13, it's coming out tmrr

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I just finished Chapter 12 and holy hell did I cry and feel a ton of emotions. Great characters, stunning art pieces and a good, hearty length so far. Can't wait for this to be finished.

Definitely a good read. You have my props and recommendations.

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I always found that self insert in some VNs is a little malfunctional, mainly cause the writer tends to sculpt the personality for the reader, so what point is a self insert if it's not yourself? 

Very wonderful read, you have my props and recommendations ^^

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For me when it comes to naming in cases of non-self inserts, it makes it easier for the main character to stand out in cases where a VN may use an ambiguous or similar name to other characters where early on it can make it harder to follow wen there are many characters on screen at the same time. Beyond that, this is a uncommon issue to encounter since it often requires a lot of dialogue intensive content with multiple characters early on, thus not giving enough time for the user to identify with the naming of the main character.

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And another one bites the dust. The self insert was the thing that made me want to play the game. Dont enjoy VNs with named protags.

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Very telling...

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damn

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Bey bey naming feature Rip🥲🥲🥲

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thank you atmac for making this amazing game.

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You're very welcome :)

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 A shame the self inserty bit will be removed but its understandable. I guess I just enjoy hot wolf men saying my name lol

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The main character will still be a sort of vessel for the reader in that regard, but the name will need to be kept as Richter.

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Only 1 more month till the release of Ch.13 guys. I hope all goes well.

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It's $1 you guys should just get the patreon update It's super worth it.

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True, but the public update will be a bit more polished.

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Amazing! I was hooked from the start, from OC's innocent character to Lyall's rough looks and attitude, I love it! I can't wait to see more of this superb novel, and I'm excited to see how it ends

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NEW CHAPTER

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just a quick question, what does it mean that it is the end of the first book? Is Lyre ending and there will be someday Lyre 2 or Lyre's sequel?

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Yes there will be 3 books

NEW CHAPTER

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I'm waiting for the next chapter ^^

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Holy dang chapter 12!! I want more!! ;w;

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Cant wait for the next update uggggggggg it's gonna hit so hard.

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Great story def amizing story line and very well written the visual art is superb i love the background's so much 



Spoiler  down below 








My hatred stands for a reson ok 




Hope  that son of bish prince get's what he deserves ☠️

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hocus pocus his ass made me lose focus

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Thank you for making my day with this comment.

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