First of all, congratulations for finishing the first book :D.
I just finished reading the novel (I had never read any previous version before) and I loved it, the drawing, the music, the story, the expressions, I really liked everything.
I'm looking forward to Dryz <3
The only thing I would have liked is that in the first chapter the relationship between Lyall and Richter would have been extended a little bit more (for example in the first dinner they had, I would have liked to see what they talked about, or the days they skipped, take advantage of one or the other to show how the connection between the two of them existed or grew.
I think those simple/everyday moments are the ones that make you get attached to the characters and feel related/friended/acquainted with them).
And a little detail that I saw in the pc version, the normal thing is that when a character talks his silhouette appears in the textbox, sometimes the Richter appeared for a moment even if he wasn't talking and wasn't in that conversation and then he disappeared and the correct character appeared.
And in the mobile version, in the gallery, I think there is only one button to forward the images, so I had to flip through all the images to go back to see another one.
(I don't know if this only happened to me because of some installation/unzipping/downloading error).
That's kind of a tone-deaf question. The person died and all that you are wondering if they had an unused music for some reason. What does this has to do with you anyway? I, for one, am think its none of your business.
Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for such a great read. I loved how you used music and programming to make some moments so special and impactful.
Also, I appreciate that the MC is confident and ambitious. There's too many GFVNs where the MC is a bumbling, stumbling pile of awkwardness, and I appreciate the ones that don't fall into this trope.
Thanks for bringing into this world emotionally mature wolf husbando without childhood trauma. May Tygren bless your souls and minds for continuing this amazing story.
Wow, just... Wow 😌 what a wild journey this has been, and it's only just begun! 😁 Thank xou so much for all the hard work xou've put into creating Lyre. Here's to the next chapter ☺️
ok, so just finished the new update. I struggle for the words. Seeing things arriving this far is pure joy. Loved what you did with the credit by the way, I squealed quite a lot. Masterful writing there.
There is only one word I can think of to describe this project, beautiful. The characters you've made, the world you've built, and the story you've forged, all of it is beautiful. I can without a doubt say this is my favorite visual novel/book I have every read.
Thank you so much for sharing your creation and I am beyond exited for book 2.
This was beautiful. Many visual novels focus too much on one aspect or another but here you have struck an impeccable balance. The story is powerful and supported by beautiful artwork and then also supported through the movements of the music. Some go overboard on their CG's and artwork that detracts from the story and even feel completely alien all together or using music that makes it hard to concentrate. Others go so into their story that they forget that the visual novel needs supporting elements. But this was just riding that line beautifully. All of us are looking forward the next book in you and your team's journey.
nope, they're two different ppl. Alverton was the one who started this connection with Tygren and after his death the onnection just was being passed to other people
To say the least; AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
I loved this so much, and ecstatic for each update! The characters, the OST, the CGs, the writing and story, all so GOOD!
One of the BEST VNs I’ve read, and probably my favorite!
I’m VERY excited for Dryz!
I just finished Chapter 12 and holy hell did I cry and feel a ton of emotions. Great characters, stunning art pieces and a good, hearty length so far. Can't wait for this to be finished.
Definitely a good read. You have my props and recommendations.
I always found that self insert in some VNs is a little malfunctional, mainly cause the writer tends to sculpt the personality for the reader, so what point is a self insert if it's not yourself?
Very wonderful read, you have my props and recommendations ^^
For me when it comes to naming in cases of non-self inserts, it makes it easier for the main character to stand out in cases where a VN may use an ambiguous or similar name to other characters where early on it can make it harder to follow wen there are many characters on screen at the same time. Beyond that, this is a uncommon issue to encounter since it often requires a lot of dialogue intensive content with multiple characters early on, thus not giving enough time for the user to identify with the naming of the main character.
Amazing! I was hooked from the start, from OC's innocent character to Lyall's rough looks and attitude, I love it! I can't wait to see more of this superb novel, and I'm excited to see how it ends
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First of all, congratulations for finishing the first book :D.
I just finished reading the novel (I had never read any previous version before) and I loved it, the drawing, the music, the story, the expressions, I really liked everything.
I'm looking forward to Dryz <3
The only thing I would have liked is that in the first chapter the relationship between Lyall and Richter would have been extended a little bit more (for example in the first dinner they had, I would have liked to see what they talked about, or the days they skipped, take advantage of one or the other to show how the connection between the two of them existed or grew.
I think those simple/everyday moments are the ones that make you get attached to the characters and feel related/friended/acquainted with them).
And a little detail that I saw in the pc version, the normal thing is that when a character talks his silhouette appears in the textbox, sometimes the Richter appeared for a moment even if he wasn't talking and wasn't in that conversation and then he disappeared and the correct character appeared.
And in the mobile version, in the gallery, I think there is only one button to forward the images, so I had to flip through all the images to go back to see another one.
(I don't know if this only happened to me because of some installation/unzipping/downloading error).
Will Augustovich continue to make music for Lyre for book 2?
Augustovich passed away back in November of 2021.
😿 That’s so sad. Was there any unused music that can still be used?
That's kind of a tone-deaf question. The person died and all that you are wondering if they had an unused music for some reason. What does this has to do with you anyway? I, for one, am think its none of your business.
Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for such a great read. I loved how you used music and programming to make some moments so special and impactful.
Also, I appreciate that the MC is confident and ambitious. There's too many GFVNs where the MC is a bumbling, stumbling pile of awkwardness, and I appreciate the ones that don't fall into this trope.
Can't wait to hear news about Dryz!
Thanks for bringing into this world emotionally mature wolf husbando without childhood trauma. May Tygren bless your souls and minds for continuing this amazing story.
is it a linear story? or does it have many endings?
Linear
Wonderful story and emotional roller coaster. I can't wait for Dryz now!!! May you feel as inspired for the next part as you did in the first.
What am I supposed to do now? This was literally a masterpiece. I hate you for making something so amazing. My standards have gone to the moon.
Once again, I plead for thy knowledge for which I may download these enchanting music.
Where can I download the OST of this game? Please?
The soundtrack is on YouTube, but you can also download it from Exias' furaffinity. It's also in the game files.
the cuteness from Lyall is overpowering
didn't play the game game but I wanna say the art reminds me of hilda (and thats very good)
I absolutely Loved watching this story unfold, and can't wait for more!
I just have one thing to say. Well done atmac. <3
Just finished Lyre, and oh my is it one of THE best VN story I've ever read, not to mention the background and music is such an amazing addition!
I just finished reading Lyre. What a wonderful story. Amazing art and incredible music. Congratulation to all the team involved on this project.
What a journey! Still hurts to know that it has ended but I'll definitely be looking foward to the sequel >.<
Wow, just... Wow 😌 what a wild journey this has been, and it's only just begun! 😁 Thank xou so much for all the hard work xou've put into creating Lyre. Here's to the next chapter ☺️
ok, so just finished the new update. I struggle for the words. Seeing things arriving this far is pure joy. Loved what you did with the credit by the way, I squealed quite a lot. Masterful writing there.
Congrats on going gold! I just finished reading a few minutes ago. Excited for your future projects!
Beautiful! just stunning bravo
I love how a selling point for the plush is that he has magnets in both hands "He can pick it up!" like even the text was proud of the little man
He can do it and he does it so well <3
Such a great vn! Enjoyed the first book to the very end and can't wait for what's to come! Keep up the fantastic work!
There is only one word I can think of to describe this project, beautiful. The characters you've made, the world you've built, and the story you've forged, all of it is beautiful. I can without a doubt say this is my favorite visual novel/book I have every read.
Thank you so much for sharing your creation and I am beyond exited for book 2.
This was beautiful. Many visual novels focus too much on one aspect or another but here you have struck an impeccable balance. The story is powerful and supported by beautiful artwork and then also supported through the movements of the music. Some go overboard on their CG's and artwork that detracts from the story and even feel completely alien all together or using music that makes it hard to concentrate. Others go so into their story that they forget that the visual novel needs supporting elements. But this was just riding that line beautifully. All of us are looking forward the next book in you and your team's journey.
Thank you for being awesome.
Does Richter was Alverton in a previous life ?
nope, they're two different ppl. Alverton was the one who started this connection with Tygren and after his death the onnection just was being passed to other people
Thank you very much
To say the least; AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
I loved this so much, and ecstatic for each update! The characters, the OST, the CGs, the writing and story, all so GOOD! One of the BEST VNs I’ve read, and probably my favorite! I’m VERY excited for Dryz!
Thank you for making Lyre!❤️
.....book 2...we gotta see this..
aw that's it for book one
I'm not sure if this is normal, but Windows detected a Trojan after I unzipped the game?
(Just downloaded Ch. 13 btw)
I changed the executable image. I've heard that windows defender can be weird about icons that use python. The game itself is completely safe.
Alright. Thanks for letting me know! Windows can be a real pain sometimes..
HYPE
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I just finished reading and i would like to say that i love lyall so much
AND the transition at the end gave me chills bro the soundtrack too!!
looking forward to dryz! ❤️ ❤️
I just reread it and I'm so excited for chapter 13, it's coming out tmrr
I just finished Chapter 12 and holy hell did I cry and feel a ton of emotions. Great characters, stunning art pieces and a good, hearty length so far. Can't wait for this to be finished.
Definitely a good read. You have my props and recommendations.
^^
I always found that self insert in some VNs is a little malfunctional, mainly cause the writer tends to sculpt the personality for the reader, so what point is a self insert if it's not yourself?
Very wonderful read, you have my props and recommendations ^^
For me when it comes to naming in cases of non-self inserts, it makes it easier for the main character to stand out in cases where a VN may use an ambiguous or similar name to other characters where early on it can make it harder to follow wen there are many characters on screen at the same time. Beyond that, this is a uncommon issue to encounter since it often requires a lot of dialogue intensive content with multiple characters early on, thus not giving enough time for the user to identify with the naming of the main character.
And another one bites the dust. The self insert was the thing that made me want to play the game. Dont enjoy VNs with named protags.
Very telling...
You're very welcome :)
A shame the self inserty bit will be removed but its understandable. I guess I just enjoy hot wolf men saying my name lol
The main character will still be a sort of vessel for the reader in that regard, but the name will need to be kept as Richter.
Only 1 more month till the release of Ch.13 guys. I hope all goes well.
It's $1 you guys should just get the patreon update It's super worth it.
True, but the public update will be a bit more polished.
Amazing! I was hooked from the start, from OC's innocent character to Lyall's rough looks and attitude, I love it! I can't wait to see more of this superb novel, and I'm excited to see how it ends